Layout Critique for web 2.0 site

kbweb · 08-13-2008, 11:13 AM

Here's a project in progress. Do not pay attention to the words (temporary) and the large white space below. The service is online business branding.

http://designsolutions.cc/bizbrand.jpg
????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/503357-layout-critique-web-2-0-site.html
Also http://designsolutions.cc/bizbrand2.jpg

- What do you like?
- What can be improved?
- Is whitespace used well?

Compare color scheme to:

http://www.volll.com/#section_main
http://tillwilly.com/
http://designdisease.com/
http://nimbupani.com/
http://www.curve2.com/

Thanks

mhdoc · 08-13-2008, 11:20 AM

Personally, I don't think the blue background goes well with the colors in the content area.

Ross · 08-13-2008, 12:44 PM

Looks good. To early to tell what you need and what you dont need. As far as design looks good the only thing i would change is make the "branding for online businesses" smaller and one line just under the biz brand logo. Make it off center so it sticks out to the right a bit. Cant really think of anything else at the moment.

Good Luck!

Loky · 08-13-2008, 04:07 PM

Originally Posted by mhdoc

Personally, I don't think the blue background goes well with the colors in the content area.

My impression also.
Other from that everything looks ok. Well done.

DDC_Cyn · 08-13-2008, 05:16 PM

I like it. The font you're using on your navigation links in the header makes the words a bit hard to read on my resolution. I'd like to see it all a big bigger, but that's my bad eyes!

nexberry · 08-14-2008, 06:12 AM

Looks good I like it.. maybe try to bring in the background lines on the right corner like over lapping the right white edge where you have the rss feed on top try and see how it looks.

08-13-2008, 11:13 AM	THREAD STARTER #1 (permalink)
kbweb NamePros Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Florida Posts: 118	Layout Critique for web 2.0 site Here's a project in progress. Do not pay attention to the words (temporary) and the large white space below. The service is online business branding. http://designsolutions.cc/bizbrand.jpg ????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/503357-layout-critique-web-2-0-site.html Also http://designsolutions.cc/bizbrand2.jpg - What do you like? - What can be improved? - Is whitespace used well? Compare color scheme to: http://www.volll.com/#section_main http://tillwilly.com/ http://designdisease.com/ http://nimbupani.com/ http://www.curve2.com/ Thanks Last edited by kbweb; 08-13-2008 at 06:05 PM.

08-13-2008, 05:16 PM	#5 (permalink)
DDC_Cyn NamePros Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: The OC Posts: 385	I like it. The font you're using on your navigation links in the header makes the words a bit hard to read on my resolution. I'd like to see it all a big bigger, but that's my bad eyes! __________________ Maximize Your Revenue DDC -- Power Parking

08-14-2008, 06:12 AM	#6 (permalink)
nexberry NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 33	Looks good I like it.. maybe try to bring in the background lines on the right corner like over lapping the right white edge where you have the rss feed on top try and see how it looks. __________________ :wave: Jose C. Nexberry.com

08-13-2008, 11:20 AM	#2 (permalink)
mhdoc Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 1,098	Personally, I don't think the blue background goes well with the colors in the content area.

08-13-2008, 12:44 PM	#3 (permalink)
Ross Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 2,132	Looks good. To early to tell what you need and what you dont need. As far as design looks good the only thing i would change is make the "branding for online businesses" smaller and one line just under the biz brand logo. Make it off center so it sticks out to the right a bit. Cant really think of anything else at the moment. Good Luck!

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