Review - Extra Heat

jdallen · 07-18-2008, 11:25 AM

Hey, I was wondering what you thought of my simple design. The reason why its simple is so it doesn't distract the user from all the content I will be uploading. Was just curious if it is working nicely.

Also, I know the domain sounds a bit saucy haha.

Link here

Tobias · 07-18-2008, 02:13 PM

I'm going to be brutally honest when I give you this constructive criticism. Please don't hate me for it

????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/494208-review-extra-heat.html

While showing potential, the image in the top left isn't all that good. The quality seems low and it does seem rather over-complicated
It's coded badly. Tables are for tables. Not for designs. If I may, I suggest you read HTML and CSS for Dummies or similar (I can't remember the precise name, sorry )
It's too simple. A design with a similar, simple layout I could suggest is http://maths2.net - That has a really nice design for its simplicity (Yes, I'm talking about the login screen) - Yet it doesn't look too simple

Still, better then some of the designs I made when I was starting. I'd show you, but I don't want to have to pay an optometrist fee for you

trixie · 07-18-2008, 10:25 PM

Hey he is really brutally honest, but if you really want to improve on that listen to him.

jdallen · 09-25-2008, 01:20 PM

Ok thanks for the replies. I have made some changes and the design now uses no tables. This is my first "layout" I've made without tables so its not overly complicated. The content is not complete as I have just quickly written something out and added a game.

I have also left it quite simple, however I will be added to it graphically =)

jdallen · 10-05-2008, 04:01 AM

bump

07-18-2008, 11:25 AM	THREAD STARTER #1 (permalink)
jdallen NamePros Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 60	Review - Extra Heat Hey, I was wondering what you thought of my simple design. The reason why its simple is so it doesn't distract the user from all the content I will be uploading. Was just curious if it is working nicely. Also, I know the domain sounds a bit saucy haha. Link here __________________ http://www.DNTakeOver.com ^^Available domains lists^^

07-18-2008, 02:13 PM	#2 (permalink)
Tobias NamePros Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 33	I'm going to be brutally honest when I give you this constructive criticism. Please don't hate me for it ????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/494208-review-extra-heat.html While showing potential, the image in the top left isn't all that good. The quality seems low and it does seem rather over-complicated It's coded badly. Tables are for tables. Not for designs. If I may, I suggest you read HTML and CSS for Dummies or similar (I can't remember the precise name, sorry ) It's too simple. A design with a similar, simple layout I could suggest is http://maths2.net - That has a really nice design for its simplicity (Yes, I'm talking about the login screen) - Yet it doesn't look too simple Still, better then some of the designs I made when I was starting. I'd show you, but I don't want to have to pay an optometrist fee for you

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09-25-2008, 01:20 PM	THREAD STARTER #4 (permalink)
jdallen NamePros Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 60	Ok thanks for the replies. I have made some changes and the design now uses no tables. This is my first "layout" I've made without tables so its not overly complicated. The content is not complete as I have just quickly written something out and added a game. I have also left it quite simple, however I will be added to it graphically =) __________________ http://www.DNTakeOver.com ^^Available domains lists^^

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jdallen NamePros Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 60	bump __________________ http://www.DNTakeOver.com ^^Available domains lists^^

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