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tres · 06-03-2008, 11:20 AM

I need your objective opinion and suggestions on how to improve this design.

Version 3

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bratosab · 06-03-2008, 11:39 AM

Hey!

I would say go with the v3; i like it because its cooler on the eyes and doesn't hurt them like the v2 white background. I also like what you did with the header on the v3, it looks great, nice pattern.
The brown fits in well for the subject.

treebytheriver · 06-03-2008, 08:35 PM

It looks nice but it looks like part of the title TexasRVSales is in italic and part of it not in italic? I would switch it all to not italic and perhaps separate the words. Maybe put "contact us" in a tab at the top, and switch to a lighter shade of brown for the background...may be easier on the eyes.

dotnom · 06-04-2008, 01:44 AM

I didn't see v2 but i think this layout is good
My only note is that logo/title of the page should be bold or modifidied in a way that can capture your first view

weblord · 06-04-2008, 01:55 AM

not unless that's the theme color it looks dull, maybe a change of color brown would do it.

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06-03-2008, 08:35 PM	#3 (permalink)
treebytheriver NamePros Regular Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: mountain girl Posts: 515 174.10 NP$ (Donate)	It looks nice but it looks like part of the title TexasRVSales is in italic and part of it not in italic? I would switch it all to not italic and perhaps separate the words. Maybe put "contact us" in a tab at the top, and switch to a lighter shade of brown for the background...may be easier on the eyes.

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weblord NamePros Legend Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Philippines - www.Nabaza.com Posts: 19,840 21,700.43 NP$ (Donate)	not unless that's the theme color it looks dull, maybe a change of color brown would do it.

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