Please Review

Ja$on · 05-30-2008, 05:23 PM

http://maidcostume.net

I am still pretty new to CSS but I think I am catching on. This will be an 18-20 or so network site for costume sales. Each site will have the same layout with different content, images and color based on the costume.

Each site will link to freecostume.net where I will give away 1 free $100 costume for every 1000 people who signs up for my mailing list.

What do you think of my work? Decent?

Thanks - Jason

P.S. Is there a way in CSS to do rollover images without using javascript? I would like to make the site javascript free.

***Corey*** · 05-30-2008, 05:37 PM

Jason the picture "Buy a maid costume" is not displaying.

All the links are going to parked pages.

Maybe a contact us link?

The colours and design is good.

Cheers

Ja$on · 05-30-2008, 05:38 PM

Yeah, this is only the first one, the links will go to the correct sites once I design those.

I just started today so taking me a little while to put together about 20 of these, lol.

not showing huh? It uses javascript to display a rollover, hmm. Do you have javascript disabled? I wonder if I should even bother with the rollover but it sort of makes it look cool.

Probably a good idea for the contact us page, I will throw one of those on there.

treebytheriver · 05-30-2008, 05:43 PM

Hi there,
If you don't fix the first link, I would move the catagories up, and also show thumbnails for each costume.

Ja$on · 05-30-2008, 05:47 PM

So the image doesn't work for you either? Are you all using IE or Firefox? I don't have firefox to check...

dotnom · 05-30-2008, 05:49 PM

No images at all for Opera either

Ja$on · 05-30-2008, 05:58 PM

Ok, I removed the javascript, can you see it now?

I have another image, exact same size. I would like to use css to mouseover and it change to the other photo, is it possible?

Seems to be an issue with my host as no images are being displayed....

dotnom · 05-30-2008, 06:21 PM

Still no images
Check if there is an image hotlink protection feature enabled to your hosting account

Ja$on · 05-30-2008, 09:57 PM

hotlink was on and the site wasn't added correctly.

Image should work now.

***Corey*** · 05-30-2008, 10:29 PM

Images working now Jason

PS Dont forget to add Contact us

Ja$on · 05-31-2008, 12:01 AM

Thanks man, will try and add that tomorrow.

dotnom · 05-31-2008, 07:03 AM

This image doesn't work
It's at the top left of the page
maidcostume.net/left_2.gif

Ja$on · 05-31-2008, 10:32 AM

Really?

http://maidcostume.net/left_2.gif

This doesn't show for you?

Also for SEO, anything I could do to improve this page?

I am thinking about adding a 2nd page of costumes as well.

dotnom · 05-31-2008, 11:43 AM

Now i do see it
It had a 403 error before

treebytheriver · 05-31-2008, 10:34 PM

Image is working for me too now, in Firefox.

Ja$on · 06-04-2008, 06:04 PM

Ok, did a few tweaks. Put the entire site in a wrapper (learned this past week) and added a few more pages.

Form doesn't work yet because I need to find an easy mailing list program.

Comments on the design?

-Alex- · 06-05-2008, 03:11 PM

Ha lol, interesting site m8...

Overall it's quite good, the design has the perfect colors for the category you are using. No tweaks I can suggest... it's all done nicely and easily planned out. Great site m8.

9.3482434943/10

Ja$on · 06-05-2008, 05:07 PM

Thanks for the review Alex.

***Corey*** · 06-05-2008, 05:13 PM

Looks great
well done Jason

Ja$on · 06-05-2008, 09:49 PM

Thanks dude. Reps added.

05-30-2008, 05:23 PM	THREAD STARTER #1 (permalink)
Ja$on Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: San Diego Posts: 2,889	Please Review http://maidcostume.net I am still pretty new to CSS but I think I am catching on. This will be an 18-20 or so network site for costume sales. Each site will have the same layout with different content, images and color based on the costume. Each site will link to freecostume.net where I will give away 1 free $100 costume for every 1000 people who signs up for my mailing list. What do you think of my work? Decent? Thanks - Jason P.S. Is there a way in CSS to do rollover images without using javascript? I would like to make the site javascript free. __________________ Dudster.com \| Domain Names For Sale

05-30-2008, 05:37 PM	#2 (permalink)
*Corey* Business Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Australia Posts: 4,200	Jason the picture "Buy a maid costume" is not displaying. All the links are going to parked pages. Maybe a contact us link? The colours and design is good. Cheers __________________ ☆ EcoWars.in ☆ Nuclear-Fallout.com ☆ Occupy.TV website/domain name for sale! ☆ EvilNames.info

05-30-2008, 05:38 PM	THREAD STARTER #3 (permalink)
Ja$on Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: San Diego Posts: 2,889	Yeah, this is only the first one, the links will go to the correct sites once I design those. I just started today so taking me a little while to put together about 20 of these, lol. not showing huh? It uses javascript to display a rollover, hmm. Do you have javascript disabled? I wonder if I should even bother with the rollover but it sort of makes it look cool. Probably a good idea for the contact us page, I will throw one of those on there. __________________ Dudster.com \| Domain Names For Sale

05-30-2008, 05:47 PM	THREAD STARTER #5 (permalink)
Ja$on Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: San Diego Posts: 2,889	So the image doesn't work for you either? Are you all using IE or Firefox? I don't have firefox to check... __________________ Dudster.com \| Domain Names For Sale

05-30-2008, 05:49 PM	#6 (permalink)
dotnom Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: ZARDEN.com Posts: 1,541	No images at all for Opera either __________________ Active Supporter of GR.com Private Second Level Domain Registry Check their Facebook page : Facebook.GR.com Check their Twitter page : Twitter.GR.com

05-30-2008, 05:43 PM	#4 (permalink)
treebytheriver NamePros Regular Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: mountain girl Posts: 537	Hi there, If you don't fix the first link, I would move the catagories up, and also show thumbnails for each costume.

05-30-2008, 05:58 PM	THREAD STARTER #7 (permalink)
Ja$on Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: San Diego Posts: 2,889	Ok, I removed the javascript, can you see it now? I have another image, exact same size. I would like to use css to mouseover and it change to the other photo, is it possible? Seems to be an issue with my host as no images are being displayed.... __________________ Dudster.com \| Domain Names For Sale

05-30-2008, 06:21 PM	#8 (permalink)
dotnom Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: ZARDEN.com Posts: 1,541	Still no images Check if there is an image hotlink protection feature enabled to your hosting account __________________ Active Supporter of GR.com Private Second Level Domain Registry Check their Facebook page : Facebook.GR.com Check their Twitter page : Twitter.GR.com

05-30-2008, 09:57 PM	THREAD STARTER #9 (permalink)
Ja$on Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: San Diego Posts: 2,889	hotlink was on and the site wasn't added correctly. Image should work now. __________________ Dudster.com \| Domain Names For Sale

05-30-2008, 10:29 PM	#10 (permalink)
*Corey* Business Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Australia Posts: 4,200	Images working now Jason PS Dont forget to add Contact us __________________ ☆ EcoWars.in ☆ Nuclear-Fallout.com ☆ Occupy.TV website/domain name for sale! ☆ EvilNames.info

05-31-2008, 12:01 AM	THREAD STARTER #11 (permalink)
Ja$on Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: San Diego Posts: 2,889	Thanks man, will try and add that tomorrow. __________________ Dudster.com \| Domain Names For Sale

05-31-2008, 07:03 AM	#12 (permalink)
dotnom Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: ZARDEN.com Posts: 1,541	This image doesn't work It's at the top left of the page maidcostume.net/left_2.gif __________________ Active Supporter of GR.com Private Second Level Domain Registry Check their Facebook page : Facebook.GR.com Check their Twitter page : Twitter.GR.com

05-31-2008, 10:32 AM	THREAD STARTER #13 (permalink)
Ja$on Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: San Diego Posts: 2,889	Really? http://maidcostume.net/left_2.gif This doesn't show for you? Also for SEO, anything I could do to improve this page? I am thinking about adding a 2nd page of costumes as well. __________________ Dudster.com \| Domain Names For Sale

05-31-2008, 11:43 AM	#14 (permalink)
dotnom Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: ZARDEN.com Posts: 1,541	Now i do see it It had a 403 error before __________________ Active Supporter of GR.com Private Second Level Domain Registry Check their Facebook page : Facebook.GR.com Check their Twitter page : Twitter.GR.com

05-31-2008, 10:34 PM	#15 (permalink)
treebytheriver NamePros Regular Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: mountain girl Posts: 537	Image is working for me too now, in Firefox.

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06-04-2008, 06:04 PM	THREAD STARTER #16 (permalink)
Ja$on Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: San Diego Posts: 2,889	Ok, did a few tweaks. Put the entire site in a wrapper (learned this past week) and added a few more pages. Form doesn't work yet because I need to find an easy mailing list program. Comments on the design? __________________ Dudster.com \| Domain Names For Sale

06-05-2008, 03:11 PM	#17 (permalink)
-Alex- Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: West Coast, U.S. Posts: 1,174	Ha lol, interesting site m8... Overall it's quite good, the design has the perfect colors for the category you are using. No tweaks I can suggest... it's all done nicely and easily planned out. Great site m8. 9.3482434943/10

06-05-2008, 05:07 PM	THREAD STARTER #18 (permalink)
Ja$on Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: San Diego Posts: 2,889	Thanks for the review Alex. __________________ Dudster.com \| Domain Names For Sale

06-05-2008, 05:13 PM	#19 (permalink)
*Corey* Business Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Australia Posts: 4,200	Looks great well done Jason __________________ ☆ EcoWars.in ☆ Nuclear-Fallout.com ☆ Occupy.TV website/domain name for sale! ☆ EvilNames.info

06-05-2008, 09:49 PM	THREAD STARTER #20 (permalink)
Ja$on Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: San Diego Posts: 2,889	Thanks dude. Reps added. __________________ Dudster.com \| Domain Names For Sale