Feedback please.

JustRyan · 03-31-2008, 01:15 PM

Please can I have a critique on my portfolio design. Please note that this is going to be a one page design. I just put it together as I am fed up of showing people zip files.

Please also not that this is my 5th full layout now, so please be constructive.

http://www.ryandownie.net/layout_final.jpg

One thing to point out there is a error in the header.

Mike · 03-31-2008, 02:33 PM

Looks good so far. I'd like to see it functional and find out how easy it is to navigate. by the looks of it, it should be very intuitive.

btw, fix the hyperlink in your post, right now it doesn't resolve unless you manually add www. to it

M.

JustRyan · 04-01-2008, 09:35 AM

Thank you Mike, Link is fixed now.

TuchWitty · 04-02-2008, 02:36 AM

I like the layout very much. Nice-n-clean, pleasing to the eyes. Would love to see it when its all cut and ready to serve on the web.

JustRyan · 04-02-2008, 07:10 AM

Thanks. I have a new version now. Changed a few elements. http://ryandownie.net/layout_new.jpg

Porte · 04-02-2008, 07:28 AM

Hi Ryan,

I love the colour scheme, it's neat for a portfolio website. I would certainly code this asap to be able to get a much detailed review. As always, remember the favicon!

JustRyan · 04-02-2008, 09:13 AM

thanks, Updated again after this round of feedback. http://ryandownie.net/latest.jpg

Dr.goldname · 04-02-2008, 09:36 AM

Ryan, One of the better layouts I have seen lately.. Pretty clean and easy on the eyes. You cold go a little bigger with your logo without being to large but not necessary. Not sure how big your file sizes per page are but hopefully they are small enough to not be a drag on bandwidth.

Looks really good.

Ross · 04-02-2008, 09:41 AM

I like this layout a lot. The only thing IMHO of course is the things in the header like the "css" and stuff just like hanging around. I think those could look a little better and make the logo part of the header a little bigger.

JustRyan · 04-02-2008, 09:44 AM

Thanks both, if you check out http://ryandownie.net/latest.jpg i have edited parts of the design.

Ross · 04-02-2008, 09:46 AM

GREAT Job! Do you agree that looks a little better?

03-31-2008, 01:15 PM	THREAD STARTER #1 (permalink)
JustRyan NamePros Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 50	Feedback please. Please can I have a critique on my portfolio design. Please note that this is going to be a one page design. I just put it together as I am fed up of showing people zip files. Please also not that this is my 5th full layout now, so please be constructive. http://www.ryandownie.net/layout_final.jpg One thing to point out there is a error in the header. Last edited by JustRyan; 04-01-2008 at 09:34 AM.

04-02-2008, 09:36 AM	#8 (permalink)
Dr.goldname NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 123	Ryan, One of the better layouts I have seen lately.. Pretty clean and easy on the eyes. You cold go a little bigger with your logo without being to large but not necessary. Not sure how big your file sizes per page are but hopefully they are small enough to not be a drag on bandwidth. Looks really good. __________________ For Sale - LoanRefinance.asia! Taking offers - EDYY.com YFEF.com UIEX.com yGUI.com WVWY.com

03-31-2008, 02:33 PM	#2 (permalink)
Mike NamePros Expert Join Date: May 2005 Location: www.chrome.us Posts: 5,184	Looks good so far. I'd like to see it functional and find out how easy it is to navigate. by the looks of it, it should be very intuitive. btw, fix the hyperlink in your post, right now it doesn't resolve unless you manually add www. to it M.

04-01-2008, 09:35 AM	THREAD STARTER #3 (permalink)
JustRyan NamePros Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 50	Thank you Mike, Link is fixed now.

04-02-2008, 02:36 AM	#4 (permalink)
TuchWitty New Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: India Posts: 11	I like the layout very much. Nice-n-clean, pleasing to the eyes. Would love to see it when its all cut and ready to serve on the web.

04-02-2008, 07:10 AM	THREAD STARTER #5 (permalink)
JustRyan NamePros Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 50	Thanks. I have a new version now. Changed a few elements. http://ryandownie.net/layout_new.jpg

04-02-2008, 07:28 AM	#6 (permalink)
Porte Senior Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: I'm right here Posts: 3,525	Hi Ryan, I love the colour scheme, it's neat for a portfolio website. I would certainly code this asap to be able to get a much detailed review. As always, remember the favicon!

04-02-2008, 09:13 AM	THREAD STARTER #7 (permalink)
JustRyan NamePros Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 50	thanks, Updated again after this round of feedback. http://ryandownie.net/latest.jpg

04-02-2008, 09:41 AM	#9 (permalink)
Ross Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 2,125	I like this layout a lot. The only thing IMHO of course is the things in the header like the "css" and stuff just like hanging around. I think those could look a little better and make the logo part of the header a little bigger.

04-02-2008, 09:44 AM	THREAD STARTER #10 (permalink)
JustRyan NamePros Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 50	Thanks both, if you check out http://ryandownie.net/latest.jpg i have edited parts of the design.

04-02-2008, 09:46 AM	#11 (permalink)
Ross Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 2,125	GREAT Job! Do you agree that looks a little better?

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