review my first site

onlyme1 · 02-22-2008, 01:03 PM

thestorychain.com

if anyone has the time to have a look feedback would be appreciated!

steitiyeh · 02-22-2008, 01:08 PM

sorrry but i think it needs a total redesign... font cant be read, colors are so bright, new proffesional logo needed... the concept is cool, i like it but it should be applied well...

please let us know if u get a newer version ready

good luck

Firas

Niek · 02-22-2008, 01:31 PM

As far is I know , and heared , pixelfonts are outdated.
Im not really a big fan of the site , just becauze of the colors.
Hate the green , and the green does not go together very well with the light grey.

Mike · 02-22-2008, 02:48 PM

Agreed. instead of picking on the things that don't work, and pinpointing the ones that do, the easy summary is truly: toss it out and start from scratch.
It's a valid effort for your first project, but you could have saved a lot of time by using an existing CMS such as Joomla or Wordpress and chosen a more appropriate design.

M.

erikm · 02-22-2008, 10:21 PM

Wow, that reminds me of when I first started web design :O Those designs are out of date these days.

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02-22-2008, 01:08 PM	#2 (permalink)
steitiyeh NamePros Member Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 36 0.00 NP$ (Donate)	sorrry but i think it needs a total redesign... font cant be read, colors are so bright, new proffesional logo needed... the concept is cool, i like it but it should be applied well... please let us know if u get a newer version ready good luck Firas

02-22-2008, 01:31 PM	#3 (permalink)
Niek NamePros Regular Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Belgium Posts: 482 29.00 NP$ (Donate)	As far is I know , and heared , pixelfonts are outdated. Im not really a big fan of the site , just becauze of the colors. Hate the green , and the green does not go together very well with the light grey.

02-22-2008, 10:21 PM	#5 (permalink)
erikm NamePros Regular Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 209 47.00 NP$ (Donate)	Wow, that reminds me of when I first started web design :O Those designs are out of date these days.

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