review my first site

onlyme1 · 02-22-2008, 02:03 PM

thestorychain.com

if anyone has the time to have a look feedback would be appreciated!

steitiyeh · 02-22-2008, 02:08 PM

sorrry but i think it needs a total redesign... font cant be read, colors are so bright, new proffesional logo needed... the concept is cool, i like it but it should be applied well...

please let us know if u get a newer version ready

good luck

Firas

Niek · 02-22-2008, 02:31 PM

As far is I know , and heared , pixelfonts are outdated.
Im not really a big fan of the site , just becauze of the colors.
Hate the green , and the green does not go together very well with the light grey.

Mike · 02-22-2008, 03:48 PM

Agreed. instead of picking on the things that don't work, and pinpointing the ones that do, the easy summary is truly: toss it out and start from scratch.
It's a valid effort for your first project, but you could have saved a lot of time by using an existing CMS such as Joomla or Wordpress and chosen a more appropriate design.

M.

erikm · 02-22-2008, 11:21 PM

Wow, that reminds me of when I first started web design

Those designs are out of date these days.

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onlyme1 New Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 8	review my first site thestorychain.com if anyone has the time to have a look feedback would be appreciated!

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steitiyeh NamePros Member Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 36	sorrry but i think it needs a total redesign... font cant be read, colors are so bright, new proffesional logo needed... the concept is cool, i like it but it should be applied well... please let us know if u get a newer version ready good luck Firas

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Niek NamePros Regular Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Belgium Posts: 511	As far is I know , and heared , pixelfonts are outdated. Im not really a big fan of the site , just becauze of the colors. Hate the green , and the green does not go together very well with the light grey.

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Mike NamePros Expert Join Date: May 2005 Location: www.chrome.us Posts: 5,217	Agreed. instead of picking on the things that don't work, and pinpointing the ones that do, the easy summary is truly: toss it out and start from scratch. It's a valid effort for your first project, but you could have saved a lot of time by using an existing CMS such as Joomla or Wordpress and chosen a more appropriate design. M.

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erikm NamePros Regular Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 217	Wow, that reminds me of when I first started web design Those designs are out of date these days.

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