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elmolesto · 02-07-2008, 05:54 PM

Hi Guys!
I just uploaded my website www.fleurdesel.ie
Any comment/suggestion will be welcome!
Thanks!

Vlad · 02-08-2008, 01:01 AM

i like ther website...it's simple and cool
but i think it would be cool to add a hover effect to the top menu links, so when you mouse-over it looks the same as the menu link looks like...i hope i was clear enough
the red effect looks quit good, but i think it would be better the way i told you

that's all so far
Vlad

erikm · 02-08-2008, 09:32 AM

Nice layout, it flows well with the theme. I think you should use a different font for the top navigation.

crazyluv · 02-09-2008, 07:01 AM

Nice site, I agree with vlad and erikm suggestions and would like to add that the three image links that move around the page, depending on the content, would fit so much better at a static position at the bottom of the page.

Also, now this is just my own opinion, but I feel that the location and contact us links feel link fillers on the navigation. I would have placed them in the About us page.

Other than that your page looks really good.

elmolesto · 02-24-2008, 06:36 AM

Thanks for your constructive comments.

I am working on a new menu at the mo with hover effect, so we can see a picture of every crêpes.

Any other ideas or suggestions?

Mike · 02-24-2008, 10:10 AM

Looks great, i agree with the others. One additional thing though, your background is too busy for your site's content and visuals.
The dish cloth type design is overpowering and too brown/beige. I'd consider making it a solid backdrop with a subtle color and eventually watermark something into it. This should make your site pop a lot more.

M.

Richard · 02-24-2008, 12:21 PM

Great web site, pages are uncluttered and to the point.

I agree with Mike about how the background is too over powering, you want to get your web site's content to overpower the background.

To slightly improve search engine optimization you could add additional META data into the <head></head> of your document, more specifically keywords. Below is an example (content is just for the example);
????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/429402-creperie.html

Code:

<meta name="keywords" content="event catering, france, french, french pancakes, new food trends"

Richard

02-07-2008, 05:54 PM	THREAD STARTER #1 (permalink)
elmolesto New Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 2	Creperie Hi Guys! I just uploaded my website www.fleurdesel.ie Any comment/suggestion will be welcome! Thanks!

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Vlad www.thehivedesigns.com :) Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Dar es Salaam, Tanzania Posts: 380	i like ther website...it's simple and cool but i think it would be cool to add a hover effect to the top menu links, so when you mouse-over it looks the same as the menu link looks like...i hope i was clear enough the red effect looks quit good, but i think it would be better the way i told you that's all so far Vlad __________________ I RECOMMEND HIVE DESIGNS FOR HIGH QUALITY WEB DESIGNS PROFESSIONALWEB 2.0 DESIGNS Forum Quotes

02-09-2008, 07:01 AM	#4 (permalink)
crazyluv NamePros Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 97	Nice site, I agree with vlad and erikm suggestions and would like to add that the three image links that move around the page, depending on the content, would fit so much better at a static position at the bottom of the page. Also, now this is just my own opinion, but I feel that the location and contact us links feel link fillers on the navigation. I would have placed them in the About us page. Other than that your page looks really good. __________________ AEInbetween

02-24-2008, 12:21 PM	#7 (permalink)
Richard NamePros Regular Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 571	Great web site, pages are uncluttered and to the point. I agree with Mike about how the background is too over powering, you want to get your web site's content to overpower the background. To slightly improve search engine optimization you could add additional META data into the <head></head> of your document, more specifically keywords. Below is an example (content is just for the example); ????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/429402-creperie.html Code: <meta name="keywords" content="event catering, france, french, french pancakes, new food trends" Richard __________________ "Failure is not the only punishment for laziness; there is also the success of others."

02-08-2008, 09:32 AM	#3 (permalink)
erikm NamePros Regular Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 217	Nice layout, it flows well with the theme. I think you should use a different font for the top navigation.

02-24-2008, 06:36 AM	THREAD STARTER #5 (permalink)
elmolesto New Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 2	Thanks for your constructive comments. I am working on a new menu at the mo with hover effect, so we can see a picture of every crêpes. Any other ideas or suggestions?

02-24-2008, 10:10 AM	#6 (permalink)
Mike NamePros Expert Join Date: May 2005 Location: www.chrome.us Posts: 5,217	Looks great, i agree with the others. One additional thing though, your background is too busy for your site's content and visuals. The dish cloth type design is overpowering and too brown/beige. I'd consider making it a solid backdrop with a subtle color and eventually watermark something into it. This should make your site pop a lot more. M.

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