Critics welcome!

webzyne · 07-28-2004, 04:59 PM

Let me know what you think: Audio Snack

NOTE: This site is NOT near completion, obviously. SOME of the links are clickable, and some aren't.. I just want a critique of the design, copy, graphics, colors, etc.

Thanks!

e39m5 · 07-28-2004, 05:14 PM

everything is great except there was one thing I did not like. The girl in your banner and in the content look the same. Try and get two different girls

webzyne · 07-28-2004, 05:16 PM

Yeah, it's the same girl because it was a purchased photo package and the audio images used the same girl.. I'll look for someone different though.

Thanks!

Mr. Websites · 07-28-2004, 06:05 PM

Looks nice. I'm guessing you already know about this, but in the "Sound Library" section of your website, the "categories" chunk appears to be incomplete. Let us know when the website is complete, and I'll take a more thorough look at the final piece. Looks amazing so far.

webzyne · 07-28-2004, 06:07 PM

Yeah, it's nowhere near completion, still a few bugs.. I just wanted comments on the overall design..

Thanks, btw

ravina · 10-20-2004, 06:24 AM

nice design

i like audio snack.color scheme is also nice

keep it up.good luck

thanks
ravina

Vindexus · 10-20-2004, 03:52 PM

Just the thing about the girl. And I can see where you're fade on the banner suddenly stops.

Hazard · 10-20-2004, 03:57 PM

as can i Vin, its not very prominent, but for designers like ourselves its easy to spot. I really like this layout, would u consider selling? PM details.

07-28-2004, 04:59 PM	THREAD STARTER #1 (permalink)
webzyne New Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Phoenixville, PA Posts: 22	Critics welcome! Let me know what you think: Audio Snack NOTE: This site is NOT near completion, obviously. SOME of the links are clickable, and some aren't.. I just want a critique of the design, copy, graphics, colors, etc. Thanks! __________________ - Justin Scheetz

07-28-2004, 05:16 PM	THREAD STARTER #3 (permalink)
webzyne New Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Phoenixville, PA Posts: 22	Yeah, it's the same girl because it was a purchased photo package and the audio images used the same girl.. I'll look for someone different though. Thanks! __________________ - Justin Scheetz

07-28-2004, 06:07 PM	THREAD STARTER #5 (permalink)
webzyne New Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Phoenixville, PA Posts: 22	Yeah, it's nowhere near completion, still a few bugs.. I just wanted comments on the overall design.. Thanks, btw __________________ - Justin Scheetz

10-20-2004, 03:57 PM	#8 (permalink)
Hazard NamePros Regular Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England, UK Posts: 406	as can i Vin, its not very prominent, but for designers like ourselves its easy to spot. I really like this layout, would u consider selling? PM details. __________________ [► Hello Everyone! ◄]

07-28-2004, 05:14 PM	#2 (permalink)
e39m5 Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 1,189	everything is great except there was one thing I did not like. The girl in your banner and in the content look the same. Try and get two different girls

07-28-2004, 06:05 PM	#4 (permalink)
Mr. Websites Senior Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: Toronto Posts: 2,308	Looks nice. I'm guessing you already know about this, but in the "Sound Library" section of your website, the "categories" chunk appears to be incomplete. Let us know when the website is complete, and I'll take a more thorough look at the final piece. Looks amazing so far.

10-20-2004, 06:24 AM	#6 (permalink)
ravina Account Closed Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 122	nice design i like audio snack.color scheme is also nice keep it up.good luck thanks ravina

10-20-2004, 03:52 PM	#7 (permalink)
Vindexus New Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 10	Just the thing about the girl. And I can see where you're fade on the banner suddenly stops.

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