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scousescott2k5 · 12-16-2007, 06:27 AM

Hi all!

Hope everyone has had a good weekend.

Right, so I've decided to test my expertise on a subject with a lot of competition. I never seem to have much luck with design, but here's what I decided.

Simple, clean design with a nice sized navigation and wide content area. Nice big header, same for the footer as these are going to be my main/only advertising space.

A bar under the navigation, telling the user where they are also linking back to the previous page.

I'm not going to stuff the page with ads, maybe one in the header and then spaced in and around the content.

I would just like a bit of advise on where to go from here.

Thanks!

Scott
www.motionmachine.info

oldsteel68 · 12-18-2007, 06:02 PM

I dont see any header or anything. Just your page rank checker script which is throwing nothing but errors.

Mike · 12-18-2007, 07:01 PM

Indeed, there's nothing to review except a large line up of error messages upon supplying a URL for PR check.

I suggest a visual overhaul of the site and a code fix.

IB

Frikkle · 12-19-2007, 02:57 AM

Simplicity is good, but there's no design here. I see you have fixed the PageRank script, but honestly there isn't anything to review.

I guess simplicity is good, but if you personalize your site with a custom layout, people will remember it and come back to it.

-Frikkle

12-16-2007, 06:27 AM	#1 (permalink)
scousescott2k5 NamePros Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 146 9.85 NP$ (Donate)	Looking For Site Review... Hi all! Hope everyone has had a good weekend. Right, so I've decided to test my expertise on a subject with a lot of competition. I never seem to have much luck with design, but here's what I decided. Simple, clean design with a nice sized navigation and wide content area. Nice big header, same for the footer as these are going to be my main/only advertising space. A bar under the navigation, telling the user where they are also linking back to the previous page. I'm not going to stuff the page with ads, maybe one in the header and then spaced in and around the content. I would just like a bit of advise on where to go from here. Thanks! Scott www.motionmachine.info __________________ Free Movies \| Tattoos $60-160/day with 1-2k traffic

12-18-2007, 06:02 PM	#2 (permalink)
oldsteel68 New Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 22 0.00 NP$ (Donate)	I dont see any header or anything. Just your page rank checker script which is throwing nothing but errors. __________________ Pepper Spray, Stun Guns, Self Defense Musician Forums and Community Advant Web Design

12-18-2007, 07:01 PM	#3 (permalink)
Mike NamePros Expert Join Date: May 2005 Location: www.chrome.us Posts: 5,245 46.20 NP$ (Donate)	Indeed, there's nothing to review except a large line up of error messages upon supplying a URL for PR check. I suggest a visual overhaul of the site and a code fix. IB __________________ Do you Chrome? [\|] Noomle No fees & More Revenue IntelBank.com<<Your Business & Your Money>>CreditHelp.TV American Pilot Center <- Learn to Fly -> PilotCenter

12-19-2007, 02:57 AM	#4 (permalink)
Frikkle NamePros Regular Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Cambridge, MA Posts: 751 11.15 NP$ (Donate)	Simplicity is good, but there's no design here. I see you have fixed the PageRank script, but honestly there isn't anything to review. I guess simplicity is good, but if you personalize your site with a custom layout, people will remember it and come back to it. -Frikkle __________________ It is difficult to get a man to understand something when his salary depends upon his not understanding it. Upton Sinclair

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