TOKYO:LONDON Please Review

JH · 12-12-2007, 06:38 AM

My new project TOKYO:LONDON

It is a site for men to keep uptodate with the latest fashion and hair styles.

The aim is also once the site is fully finished to turn TOKYO:LONDON into a brand.

What are your thoughts on the site design?

iulianh · 12-12-2007, 07:25 AM

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Originally Posted by JH

My new project TOKYO:LONDON

It is a site for men to keep uptodate with the latest fashion and hair styles.

The aim is also once the site is fully finished to turn TOKYO:LONDON into a brand.

What are your thoughts on the site design?

Your site is dead, i cannot acces it

Mike · 12-12-2007, 08:15 AM

The site looks stylish, although i get the feeling that there's something missing - even though I can't really point out what it is. Maybe it's that vast amount of empty space that you have OR the wide content frame in comparison to your small logo. You should
- tighten it up a bit
- most definitely improve your site loading time, which at current is extremely slow
- get more content going
- make a separate tab for the TV section
- maybe look for alternate templates that have smarter spacing
- use your actual logo, maybe the 90 degree angle as favicon, not the templates default square

That's it for now, i'm sure that others are probably of more help to your project.

IB

JH · 12-12-2007, 10:09 AM

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Originally Posted by IntelBank

The site looks stylish, although i get the feeling that there's something missing - even though I can't really point out what it is. Maybe it's that vast amount of empty space that you have OR the wide content frame in comparison to your small logo. You should
- tighten it up a bit
- most definitely improve your site loading time, which at current is extremely slow
- get more content going
- make a separate tab for the TV section
- maybe look for alternate templates that have smarter spacing
- use your actual logo, maybe the 90 degree angle as favicon, not the templates default square

That's it for now, i'm sure that others are probably of more help to your project.

IB

Thanks for the feedback,

I custom coded and designed the site,

- New Logo
- iv tightened it up a bit
- changed the fav icon

COMING SOON
- added a seperate page for the TV
- content will be added , site only made today

As for the loading time i think it is my hosts servers

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Mike NamePros Expert Join Date: May 2005 Location: www.chrome.us Posts: 5,245 46.20 NP$ (Donate)	The site looks stylish, although i get the feeling that there's something missing - even though I can't really point out what it is. Maybe it's that vast amount of empty space that you have OR the wide content frame in comparison to your small logo. You should - tighten it up a bit - most definitely improve your site loading time, which at current is extremely slow - get more content going - make a separate tab for the TV section - maybe look for alternate templates that have smarter spacing - use your actual logo, maybe the 90 degree angle as favicon, not the templates default square That's it for now, i'm sure that others are probably of more help to your project. IB __________________ Do you Chrome? [\|] Noomle No fees & More Revenue IntelBank.com<<Your Business & Your Money>>CreditHelp.TV American Pilot Center <- Learn to Fly -> PilotCenter

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