Review my New Baby

sorpeman · 12-04-2007, 03:40 PM

http://pulb.net/

is my new site i just finished designing.

Its a simple straightforward 1 page site...

what do you think about it?

sorpeman · 12-05-2007, 08:18 AM

not even a single review

Porte · 12-05-2007, 09:53 AM

Sorry.

It's very slowly loading here for me. But after that .. I said "Wow!" This is a professional logo, the designer is very talended. I apologize, but that page does not any reviews

However, the page is so simple, I see you're very talended. Why not use this talent for something more detailed, showcase, etc.

5/5..ah no favicon

Hafsoh · 12-05-2007, 11:33 AM

Its really professional. It so simple and straight forward. To me it prefect!

Frikkle · 12-09-2007, 10:43 AM

Very nice and simple site, perfect for a portfolio.

I am thinking though...once your portfolio expands to more than three sites, you will eventually need to either make the display a scroller or add a second page.

The design is pretty much perfect. Since your site fits the style of web 2.0, I recommend making the mail form AJAX.

There are a few writing mistakes: dead-line should be deadline, donot --> do not at the bottom.

Also, I think that your logo perhaps doesn't match. It looks too flat and solid compared to the rest of the site.

I also recommend emphasizing Pulb.NET so that you don't lose traffic to the .com

-Frikkle

Mike · 12-09-2007, 10:50 AM

In addition to what's already been said, my recommendation is to get someone to proof read your text and eventually write an ad copy for you. It's not going to be free, but your talents are definitely more on the design platform than as a writer. No shame in that though, as there are plenty of people who can't design but write.

IB

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Porte Senior Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: Somewhere on earth! Posts: 3,528 21.30 NP$ (Donate)	Sorry. It's very slowly loading here for me. But after that .. I said "Wow!" This is a professional logo, the designer is very talended. I apologize, but that page does not any reviews However, the page is so simple, I see you're very talended. Why not use this talent for something more detailed, showcase, etc. 5/5..ah no favicon __________________ Custom WordPress theme design. Top notch free WordPress themes Custom Theme Design

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12-09-2007, 10:43 AM	#5 (permalink)
Frikkle NamePros Regular Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Cambridge, MA Posts: 751 11.15 NP$ (Donate)	Very nice and simple site, perfect for a portfolio. I am thinking though...once your portfolio expands to more than three sites, you will eventually need to either make the display a scroller or add a second page. The design is pretty much perfect. Since your site fits the style of web 2.0, I recommend making the mail form AJAX. There are a few writing mistakes: dead-line should be deadline, donot --> do not at the bottom. Also, I think that your logo perhaps doesn't match. It looks too flat and solid compared to the rest of the site. I also recommend emphasizing Pulb.NET so that you don't lose traffic to the .com -Frikkle __________________ It is difficult to get a man to understand something when his salary depends upon his not understanding it. Upton Sinclair

12-09-2007, 10:50 AM	#6 (permalink)
Mike NamePros Expert Join Date: May 2005 Location: www.chrome.us Posts: 5,245 46.20 NP$ (Donate)	In addition to what's already been said, my recommendation is to get someone to proof read your text and eventually write an ad copy for you. It's not going to be free, but your talents are definitely more on the design platform than as a writer. No shame in that though, as there are plenty of people who can't design but write. IB __________________ Do you Chrome? [\|] Noomle No fees & More Revenue IntelBank.com<<Your Business & Your Money>>CreditHelp.TV American Pilot Center <- Learn to Fly -> PilotCenter

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