Please check my second Mini-Mini-Site

bodiby · 12-03-2007, 11:29 PM

My first version did not impress the judges here, so I went back to the drawing board.

This is not complete, but I would like some feedback. I definitely do not like the top banner, but I don't know what direction to go.

Thanks all.

edit-moved page
http://www.poker-for-me.com

weblord · 12-03-2007, 11:39 PM

needs some graphics to push the message otherwise all are ok for me.

bodiby · 12-03-2007, 11:42 PM

Thanks

Mike · 12-04-2007, 03:48 PM

Much better! as Weblord already said, get graphics on board.
Also, a custom logo, associated content/text and SMART! ad placement and you should have a very good looking site!

Keep us posted with the improvements!

IB

TheBes7 · 12-06-2007, 12:12 PM

Such an interesiting design.

ghing · 12-06-2007, 12:21 PM

I also think that you need some graphics on your header image..
your site is all about Poker.. maybe a playing cards image is the best one to suit your site.. IMO..

bodiby · 12-06-2007, 03:23 PM

I definitly will be adding images. I have made some minor tweaks to the banner font, but forgot to push them.

Thanks for all your input.

Frikkle · 12-09-2007, 12:38 PM

It's gone now.

Nothing there to review but a 404 Error page

-Frikkle

bodiby · 12-10-2007, 11:25 PM

I moved the page. Updated original post.

whitebark · 12-10-2007, 11:46 PM

You may want to remove the google ad. Google is not so happy with gambling...

The main text area should be changed in color - the white on grey is hard to read.

Other than that the layout should produce a decent ctr.

bodiby · 12-11-2007, 12:02 PM

@whitebark

damn google. i am even getting some relevant ads! who else can I use? i was going to add some amazon ads.

What text color do you suggest?

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bodiby NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 93	Please check my second Mini-Mini-Site My first version did not impress the judges here, so I went back to the drawing board. This is not complete, but I would like some feedback. I definitely do not like the top banner, but I don't know what direction to go. Thanks all. edit-moved page http://www.poker-for-me.com Last edited by bodiby; 12-10-2007 at 11:24 PM.

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bodiby NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 93	Thanks

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Mike NamePros Expert Join Date: May 2005 Location: www.chrome.us Posts: 5,217	Much better! as Weblord already said, get graphics on board. Also, a custom logo, associated content/text and SMART! ad placement and you should have a very good looking site! Keep us posted with the improvements! IB

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TheBes7 New Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 16	Such an interesiting design.

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bodiby NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 93	I definitly will be adding images. I have made some minor tweaks to the banner font, but forgot to push them. Thanks for all your input.

12-10-2007, 11:25 PM	THREAD STARTER #9 (permalink)
bodiby NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 93	I moved the page. Updated original post.

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bodiby NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 93	@whitebark damn google. i am even getting some relevant ads! who else can I use? i was going to add some amazon ads. What text color do you suggest?

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