Please check my second Mini-Mini-Site

bodiby · 12-03-2007, 10:29 PM

My first version did not impress the judges here, so I went back to the drawing board.

This is not complete, but I would like some feedback. I definitely do not like the top banner, but I don't know what direction to go.

Thanks all.

edit-moved page
http://www.poker-for-me.com

weblord · 12-03-2007, 10:39 PM

needs some graphics to push the message otherwise all are ok for me.

bodiby · 12-03-2007, 10:42 PM

Thanks

Mike · 12-04-2007, 02:48 PM

Much better! as Weblord already said, get graphics on board.
Also, a custom logo, associated content/text and SMART! ad placement and you should have a very good looking site!

Keep us posted with the improvements!

IB

TheBes7 · 12-06-2007, 11:12 AM

Such an interesiting design.

ghing · 12-06-2007, 11:21 AM

I also think that you need some graphics on your header image..
your site is all about Poker.. maybe a playing cards image is the best one to suit your site.. IMO..

bodiby · 12-06-2007, 02:23 PM

I definitly will be adding images. I have made some minor tweaks to the banner font, but forgot to push them.

Thanks for all your input.

Frikkle · 12-09-2007, 11:38 AM

It's gone now.

Nothing there to review but a 404 Error page :P

-Frikkle

bodiby · 12-10-2007, 10:25 PM

I moved the page. Updated original post.

whitebark · 12-10-2007, 10:46 PM

You may want to remove the google ad. Google is not so happy with gambling...

The main text area should be changed in color - the white on grey is hard to read.

Other than that the layout should produce a decent ctr.

bodiby · 12-11-2007, 11:02 AM

@whitebark

damn google. i am even getting some relevant ads! who else can I use? i was going to add some amazon ads.

What text color do you suggest?

12-03-2007, 10:29 PM	#1 (permalink)
bodiby NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 93 292.50 NP$ (Donate)	Please check my second Mini-Mini-Site My first version did not impress the judges here, so I went back to the drawing board. This is not complete, but I would like some feedback. I definitely do not like the top banner, but I don't know what direction to go. Thanks all. edit-moved page http://www.poker-for-me.com Last edited by bodiby; 12-10-2007 at 10:24 PM.

12-04-2007, 02:48 PM	#4 (permalink)
Mike NamePros Expert Join Date: May 2005 Location: www.chrome.us Posts: 5,245 46.20 NP$ (Donate)	Much better! as Weblord already said, get graphics on board. Also, a custom logo, associated content/text and SMART! ad placement and you should have a very good looking site! Keep us posted with the improvements! IB __________________ Do you Chrome? [\|] Noomle No fees & More Revenue IntelBank.com<<Your Business & Your Money>>CreditHelp.TV American Pilot Center <- Learn to Fly -> PilotCenter

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whitebark Part-Time Zombie Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada Posts: 3,264 298.15 NP$ (Donate)	You may want to remove the google ad. Google is not so happy with gambling... The main text area should be changed in color - the white on grey is hard to read. Other than that the layout should produce a decent ctr. __________________ Canadian Domain Names \| Safe Domain Search! \| Freelance Work *DOT CA DOMAINS DEMYSTIFIED!* \| How To Register and Use CCTLDs Website Hosting Coupons \| ZOMBIES \| Green Business Directory

12-03-2007, 10:39 PM	#2 (permalink)
weblord NamePros Legend Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Philippines - www.Nabaza.com Posts: 19,840 21,700.43 NP$ (Donate)	needs some graphics to push the message otherwise all are ok for me.

12-03-2007, 10:42 PM	#3 (permalink)
bodiby NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 93 292.50 NP$ (Donate)	Thanks

12-06-2007, 11:12 AM	#5 (permalink)
TheBes7 New Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 16 0.00 NP$ (Donate)	Such an interesiting design.

12-06-2007, 02:23 PM	#7 (permalink)
bodiby NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 93 292.50 NP$ (Donate)	I definitly will be adding images. I have made some minor tweaks to the banner font, but forgot to push them. Thanks for all your input.

12-10-2007, 10:25 PM	#9 (permalink)
bodiby NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 93 292.50 NP$ (Donate)	I moved the page. Updated original post.

12-11-2007, 11:02 AM	#11 (permalink)
bodiby NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 93 292.50 NP$ (Donate)	@whitebark damn google. i am even getting some relevant ads! who else can I use? i was going to add some amazon ads. What text color do you suggest?

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