what do you think?

monto · 11-10-2007, 04:39 AM

CLOSE ME!

monto · 11-10-2007, 06:46 PM

nothing?

NabZ245 · 11-10-2007, 06:51 PM

It looks good, nicely laid out. Looks like you did a good job.
Just one thing tho, the grass towards the bottom looks abit out of place. But it might just be me.

Regards

Mike · 11-10-2007, 06:55 PM

Some really good work - unfortunately not so much on your own design, but your clients designs are well done.
What you have going for your site is the content. Well written, nicely researched, i'm guessing this content is unique to your site?
What you should consider is spending a bit more time on the visual presentation of your site. Give it some visual substance that showcases your talents. In your "About Us" section you're outlining an array of skills, as a potential client, i'd like to see, hear and feel your ability to "move and shake" websites.

IB

Blindkilla · 11-10-2007, 07:05 PM

I like it a lot. Simple and Sleek.

Easy to find what you need to find on there.

Great work

monto · 11-10-2007, 11:10 PM

Thank you so much for all of your feedback! I will definitely keep all of this in mind with the next revision! All of your advice is appreciated.

Porte · 11-11-2007, 06:53 AM

Hi monto, the website is neat, clean and simple.

But the green part of the footer could be eliminated. Besides this, you could add some life to your site, like colorful navigation or something that attracts your users, the current theme is simple indeed , and straightforward too. Good luck

BTW, do not forget the favicon

Hafsoh · 11-14-2007, 11:38 PM

You have gotten a nice, simple site there, easy to navigate but just remove the greenish design at the bottom there seems it will be more attractive without there.

visoads · 11-15-2007, 03:33 AM

looks clean and loads pretty quickly.

the hosting page looks a little plain imo, possibly adding more plans or text (such as software/hardware used) and possibly more images.

Vlad · 11-19-2007, 10:27 AM

Hi Monto,
first what I noticed was the logo
remove the noise effect from it, I hope you know what I mean
try making the text bigger, aswell as the images above the search box
and put a bit more space between breakthrough and reading pa web design
about the footer, the grass or what's that looks bad.
and also, try making some changes on the border of the layout
and put some bulletpoints for
Lost Password? and Register now!

that's all from me
regards,
Vlad.

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Porte Senior Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: I'm right here Posts: 3,526	Hi monto, the website is neat, clean and simple. But the green part of the footer could be eliminated. Besides this, you could add some life to your site, like colorful navigation or something that attracts your users, the current theme is simple indeed , and straightforward too. Good luck BTW, do not forget the favicon __________________ WP Theme Developer Your One-stop for Premium Magazine/CMS WordPress Themes Deluxe Themes

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NabZ245 NamePros Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 136	It looks good, nicely laid out. Looks like you did a good job. Just one thing tho, the grass towards the bottom looks abit out of place. But it might just be me. Regards

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Mike NamePros Expert Join Date: May 2005 Location: www.chrome.us Posts: 5,217	Some really good work - unfortunately not so much on your own design, but your clients designs are well done. What you have going for your site is the content. Well written, nicely researched, i'm guessing this content is unique to your site? What you should consider is spending a bit more time on the visual presentation of your site. Give it some visual substance that showcases your talents. In your "About Us" section you're outlining an array of skills, as a potential client, i'd like to see, hear and feel your ability to "move and shake" websites. IB

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Blindkilla NamePros Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 136	I like it a lot. Simple and Sleek. Easy to find what you need to find on there. Great work

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visoads Account Closed Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 34	looks clean and loads pretty quickly. the hosting page looks a little plain imo, possibly adding more plans or text (such as software/hardware used) and possibly more images.

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Vlad www.thehivedesigns.com :) Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Dar es Salaam, Tanzania Posts: 380	Hi Monto, first what I noticed was the logo remove the noise effect from it, I hope you know what I mean try making the text bigger, aswell as the images above the search box and put a bit more space between breakthrough and reading pa web design about the footer, the grass or what's that looks bad. and also, try making some changes on the border of the layout and put some bulletpoints for Lost Password? and Register now! that's all from me regards, Vlad. __________________ I RECOMMEND HIVE DESIGNS FOR HIGH QUALITY WEB DESIGNS PROFESSIONALWEB 2.0 DESIGNS Forum Quotes

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