asiafoodsafety.com

nantech1 · 08-30-2007, 08:50 AM

Hi NP'ers:
I designed a Whypark site focusing on pet food safety. Very few hits. Your constructive criticism is welcome. I can take it.

Please take a look at http://www.asiafoodsafety.com. Let me know what you think.
Thanks.

Mike · 08-30-2007, 10:19 AM

Your DN Name doesn't have much to do with the content you're displaying....unless i'm totally missing the connection between the two.
The images need some cleaning up and be a bit less pixelated.
Proof read your content, there are a few errors here and there.

The length of the content is overbearing, loosen it up a bit and try to find out whether you can place images into your content. It would make the whole thing a lot easier on the eyes.

Other than that, for a parking page, that's a pretty good effort!

IB

nantech1 · 08-30-2007, 11:15 AM

Yes Mike when I was new in domaining I regged the domain, then determined that pet food safety had a better KEI than human food safety, so I wrote about the former. Thanks for the suggestions.

To All: Any other comments?

08-30-2007, 08:50 AM	THREAD STARTER #1 (permalink)
nantech1 NamePros Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 39	asiafoodsafety.com Hi NP'ers: I designed a Whypark site focusing on pet food safety. Very few hits. Your constructive criticism is welcome. I can take it. Please take a look at http://www.asiafoodsafety.com. Let me know what you think. Thanks.

08-30-2007, 10:19 AM	#2 (permalink)
Mike NamePros Expert Join Date: May 2005 Location: www.chrome.us Posts: 5,217	Your DN Name doesn't have much to do with the content you're displaying....unless i'm totally missing the connection between the two. The images need some cleaning up and be a bit less pixelated. Proof read your content, there are a few errors here and there. The length of the content is overbearing, loosen it up a bit and try to find out whether you can place images into your content. It would make the whole thing a lot easier on the eyes. Other than that, for a parking page, that's a pretty good effort! IB

08-30-2007, 11:15 AM	THREAD STARTER #3 (permalink)
nantech1 NamePros Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 39	Yes Mike when I was new in domaining I regged the domain, then determined that pet food safety had a better KEI than human food safety, so I wrote about the former. Thanks for the suggestions. To All: Any other comments?

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