Please review! I'd appreciate any input on this site

healymedia · 08-17-2007, 12:03 AM

Hello,
I recently submited a site for review, www.lessonlistings.com, and I decided the original design wasnt good enough. I had it redesigned and this is how it came out
LessonListings.com

I made the header and the image at left myself, the rest was done by the guys who coded the site.

Any opinions, criticisms or suggestions?

I appreciate any input

Thanks
Ryan

Mike · 08-17-2007, 06:37 AM

No offense, but the first thought that came to mind was: Ah, another e-book, email address collecting, eventual spam site.

I'm sure there are other interface options. Options that establish a clear visual difference between your site and sites that just want to sell something and then be "out the door". A little more tie back to music would be great as well. In short, i think the essence of what you're setting out to do is getting lost with the overall design you're using.

IB

healymedia · 08-17-2007, 10:37 AM

Excellent feedback.
Id love to hear any suggestions you might have. Is it the entire layout in general, or only certain elements?

Thanks
Ryan

Krossat · 08-17-2007, 10:43 AM

I'll give my feedback in an bit, but there is a typo in the middle next to the small image of the guitar on a piano table.
LessonListings is written LissonListings.
Just pointed so that u can correct it before ur members see it.

healymedia · 08-18-2007, 10:02 AM

Made some changes to the layout. Took out a few eyesore objects.

Id really like to hear more about this, especially from IntelBank on exactly what elements contribute to the "spammy" look so I can fix them.

Thanks for the input guys

Jesus · 08-18-2007, 11:45 AM

That´s googd but... is a ajax? and CS?

o only php mode?

thx

vivsin · 08-18-2007, 12:40 PM

design is missing an overall smoothness,

- add HOVER effect in header menu, its looking dead right now

- Border color in boxes ( red one ) is too dark i feel

- add a thich break in footer area ( like HR before bottom links )

healymedia · 08-18-2007, 11:15 PM

Hi
What exactly is hover effect and how would I add it to a menu thats part of the header image?
Right now the menu links are part of the header and then are image mapped to be links

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healymedia NamePros Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 122 0.00 NP$ (Donate)	Please review! I'd appreciate any input on this site Hello, I recently submited a site for review, www.lessonlistings.com, and I decided the original design wasnt good enough. I had it redesigned and this is how it came out LessonListings.com I made the header and the image at left myself, the rest was done by the guys who coded the site. Any opinions, criticisms or suggestions? I appreciate any input Thanks Ryan __________________ JurassicParkIV.net - GIJoeMovie.net IronMan2.net - FirstAvenger.net JusticeLeagueMovie.net - TerminatorSalvationMovie.net

08-17-2007, 06:37 AM	#2 (permalink)
Mike NamePros Expert Join Date: May 2005 Location: www.chrome.us Posts: 5,245 46.20 NP$ (Donate)	No offense, but the first thought that came to mind was: Ah, another e-book, email address collecting, eventual spam site. I'm sure there are other interface options. Options that establish a clear visual difference between your site and sites that just want to sell something and then be "out the door". A little more tie back to music would be great as well. In short, i think the essence of what you're setting out to do is getting lost with the overall design you're using. IB __________________ Do you Chrome? [\|] Noomle No fees & More Revenue IntelBank.com<<Your Business & Your Money>>CreditHelp.TV American Pilot Center <- Learn to Fly -> PilotCenter

08-17-2007, 10:37 AM	#3 (permalink)
healymedia NamePros Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 122 0.00 NP$ (Donate)	Excellent feedback. Id love to hear any suggestions you might have. Is it the entire layout in general, or only certain elements? Thanks Ryan __________________ JurassicParkIV.net - GIJoeMovie.net IronMan2.net - FirstAvenger.net JusticeLeagueMovie.net - TerminatorSalvationMovie.net

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Krossat krossat.com Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: New Zealand Posts: 3,623 1,035.00 NP$ (Donate)	I'll give my feedback in an bit, but there is a typo in the middle next to the small image of the guitar on a piano table. LessonListings is written LissonListings. Just pointed so that u can correct it before ur members see it. __________________ <<< Krossat's Blog : Launching Soon - Available Names & Drop Software Site >>> <<< Disclosable Available Domain Lists : : GeoGeneric "US" Domains >>> <<Profit Hour>> <<Image Gallery>> <<Comedy Central>>

08-18-2007, 10:02 AM	#5 (permalink)
healymedia NamePros Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 122 0.00 NP$ (Donate)	Made some changes to the layout. Took out a few eyesore objects. Id really like to hear more about this, especially from IntelBank on exactly what elements contribute to the "spammy" look so I can fix them. Thanks for the input guys __________________ JurassicParkIV.net - GIJoeMovie.net IronMan2.net - FirstAvenger.net JusticeLeagueMovie.net - TerminatorSalvationMovie.net

08-18-2007, 11:45 AM	#6 (permalink)
Jesus Account Closed Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 100 29.45 NP$ (Donate)	That´s googd but... is a ajax? and CS? o only php mode? thx

08-18-2007, 12:40 PM	#7 (permalink)
vivsin NamePros Regular Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 984 1,567.95 NP$ (Donate)	design is missing an overall smoothness, - add HOVER effect in header menu, its looking dead right now - Border color in boxes ( red one ) is too dark i feel - add a thich break in footer area ( like HR before bottom links ) __________________ VIVSIN \| NatGeo for WebMasters Visit : My Web Development Blog :kickass: This is where I started, This is where I will end. NAMEPROS = :kickass:

08-18-2007, 11:15 PM	#8 (permalink)
healymedia NamePros Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 122 0.00 NP$ (Donate)	Hi What exactly is hover effect and how would I add it to a menu thats part of the header image? Right now the menu links are part of the header and then are image mapped to be links __________________ JurassicParkIV.net - GIJoeMovie.net IronMan2.net - FirstAvenger.net JusticeLeagueMovie.net - TerminatorSalvationMovie.net

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