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Old 06-27-2004, 06:48 AM THREAD STARTER               #1 (permalink)
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Please comment - olny constructive criticism


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Old 06-27-2004, 08:39 AM   #2 (permalink)
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It's hard to comment on, so all I would recommend is placing a faint border around both the websites. If you are willing to use flash for the first template, I would make the earth's image an actual rotating one. You could find a few nice one's over here. Good luck with the templates.
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pretty nice template u got..
maybe adding flash to rotate that globe indeed..
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Yeah, look under "globes" in the showcase. You should find something around there. These things are expensive but they'll improve the quality of the template greatly.
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Yeh,there will be a 1px border around the main area, it was planned but I forgot about it
The rotating globe would be a great addition, but I`m afraid it`s waaay to expensive for me If the client wants it, he`ll buy it and I`ll integrate it or smth like that
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some mild flash text animation in the clouds area will look good...

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Old 06-29-2004, 04:47 PM   #8 (permalink)
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I think they are quite good
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Old 06-30-2004, 05:15 AM THREAD STARTER               #9 (permalink)
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Thanks for the positive feedback
Still haven`t sold any, despite the very low price,40 USD ... oh well, I`ll keep doing it,it`s fun
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Old 06-30-2004, 06:49 AM   #10 (permalink)
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nice. you could sell that for some extra $$, should fetch a little but. Lol, on the second one, those graphs, i made a template where it has them almost exactly like that, but they are reversed, lol. *great minds think alike*, hehe
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What graphs ? The ones that stand for 'bullets' for the top menu items ? I thoutgh they`d be cool on a company site ... anyway,nobody wants to buy it, not even coded
Please feel free to check out my 'site' and tell me what you think ... it`s still under construction though ...

PS : are there any errors on the site ? None for me with firefox/IE ... yet
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nice layout, kill the quick search that follows me around, its annoying, otherwise i like every, i would put the quick search at the top of the page
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Errmm the quick search thingie belongs to the free host :ashamed: ...
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Old 06-30-2004, 10:25 AM   #14 (permalink)
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like, the square boxes that are filled or empty depending on your skill in that area. i think its a great idea.
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If people only give you whats good, how are you supposed to learn? I strive on the bad, because i take it, and use that to make the layout better!

As for the layout:

The first one is very nice, and is a professional layout. I really like the slogan. Very catchy. All i have to say about that design is it needs a new logo.

Second design:
This one is nice also. Maby make the header a little bigger, but other than that, it is very nice.

Great job, good luck with the sale
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Now see people, that`s the kind of feedback I was looking for ... the one idevisedesign gave me !
As for the logo part .. yeh ... I know it needs a new one but I haven`t had the time to think about a nice logo concept for ScriptDownloads yet, had a lot of exams and schtuff
????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/36146-please-comment-olny-constructive-criticism.html
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PS : oh yes, that ScriptDownloads banner that you sometimes see in the header of this site is my work too .. not too proud of it , but I promise I`ll make a new one
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wait, nvm, the like stats graph icons. my most recent post about skill, nvm, lol, its for another one i thought was this, haha
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Old 06-30-2004, 12:31 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Hey, for the second website you posted- I would place borders around the entire website, and borders around what your current offer consists of. The area where it says "welcome" seems a bit too blank, imho. I would add a different background to the webpage instead of the silver one currently in place. Perhaps a small cube repeated consistantly, like the one at vir2l, except with a much lighter color. Honestly, there's a bit too much white where the main content is.
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yeh, I feel there`s too much white there too, but it`s only because there`s no 'real' content yet, I still have to work on some tetx+pics to fit in there, and I`ll post back in a couple of days ... I wanted to know if you guys liked the concept/ top area ... that kind of schtuff
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You mean you want comments just on the header? I would change the font you are currently using on the menu, to one of those neat pixel ones.
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ya, pixel fonts are koo.
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Now see people, that`s the kind of feedback I was looking for ... the one idevisedesign gave me
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lol Garret is kewl...
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Ok people, I told you I was making a new banner for ScriptDownloads.com ... you can now check it out at
ScriptDownloads banner ... and please tell me what you like/hate ... thanks
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notbad, but it looks like a murky color in the bottom left, well the bottom in general, i would change that, but good job overall!
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