please critique

oblivious · 06-22-2004, 03:44 PM

http://www.geocities.com/obliviousgraphics/blah.html

I just made this template today, and I know none of the links on the nav bar at the top work yet, but what do you think? I really don't want to go any farther if it stinks.

Mr. Websites · 06-22-2004, 04:42 PM

I think it looks alright, keep going. You should look into alternative fonts, honestly. The background (with the small cubes) needs work. In the future, perhaps you could add a fadding rollover effect on the buttons (when the menu is complete), something like this or this. I think the website will turn out to be fine, don't quit on it.

oblivious · 06-22-2004, 05:03 PM

I like the fading rollover effect idea, I think I'll try that. And you're right about the bg, the cubes don't match up. I'll have to fix that.

Slewey · 06-23-2004, 08:08 AM

not bad!
think you should keep up, maybe add some different fonts to it, and the background needs some work indeed.
but not bad!

keep us updated

oblivious · 06-24-2004, 12:27 PM

I replaced the bg

Mr. Websites · 06-24-2004, 02:59 PM

Yeah, the background looks much better now.

06-22-2004, 03:44 PM	THREAD STARTER #1 (permalink)
oblivious NamePros Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 181	please critique http://www.geocities.com/obliviousgraphics/blah.html I just made this template today, and I know none of the links on the nav bar at the top work yet, but what do you think? I really don't want to go any farther if it stinks.

06-22-2004, 04:42 PM	#2 (permalink)
Mr. Websites Senior Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: Toronto Posts: 2,308	I think it looks alright, keep going. You should look into alternative fonts, honestly. The background (with the small cubes) needs work. In the future, perhaps you could add a fadding rollover effect on the buttons (when the menu is complete), something like this or this. I think the website will turn out to be fine, don't quit on it.

06-22-2004, 05:03 PM	THREAD STARTER #3 (permalink)
oblivious NamePros Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 181	I like the fading rollover effect idea, I think I'll try that. And you're right about the bg, the cubes don't match up. I'll have to fix that.

06-23-2004, 08:08 AM	#4 (permalink)
Slewey NamePros Regular Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: NL Posts: 808	not bad! think you should keep up, maybe add some different fonts to it, and the background needs some work indeed. but not bad! keep us updated

06-24-2004, 12:27 PM	THREAD STARTER #5 (permalink)
oblivious NamePros Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 181	I replaced the bg

06-24-2004, 02:59 PM	#6 (permalink)
Mr. Websites Senior Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: Toronto Posts: 2,308	Yeah, the background looks much better now.

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