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06-01-2007, 06:28 PM
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| First Time Poster! Join Date: Jun 2007
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   | Platform: A Weekly Web Game Readers of WebDesign Talk might be interested in a project I'm developing: www.platformthegame.com Platform is an episodic web game, updated weekly. Feedback is welcome. |
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06-02-2007, 03:21 PM
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| NamePros Expert  Join Date: May 2005 Location: www.chrome.us
Posts: 5,217
    | Interesting. You're cloaking the project with non descriptiveness, non explanatory content and nothing to go "after'. Since you're proposing a game, why not giving a decent introduction to the game, because at first glance, there's nothing drawing me into the site or anything that could potentially keep me there. I'd improve the design drastically and make it more "entertaining"... |
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06-03-2007, 03:32 AM
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| Traveller  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Yet another city
Posts: 1,419
    | IMHO: The "Platform" header is far too big The shadow underneath it looks wrong - on the L you have the shadow going off at an angle, whereas all the other letters have a "noon" shadow. The image buttons "first", "last", "archives" are a green which does not "go" with the grey background. Also I strongly agree with IntelBank that you need to describe the game!
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