movingconcierge

I'd love to hear comments on The Moving Concierge site.

Thanks. Rep+

shockie

the menu looks much better and the addition of the logo is nice too.

shove a little space between the title "Packing & Moving Tips" and the paragraph. the other pages have that space there between title and paragraph so it you probably just overlooked it.

try to keep the "buy moving boxes" page consistent with the rest of the site in terms of the navigation/menu.

and btw, you made a typo in your meta keywords tag (movign)

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movingconcierge

Thanks for the review and remembering how far it's come.

I'll correct those items now. rep+

Mike

Very nice revamp. Looks a lot "lighter" yet more targeted towards your message.

Aside from the things that shockie already pointed out, the one thing in addition, that stood out to me is the length of "Moving Company Terminology - Moving Glossary". There's tons of content, it would be beneficial to have a "linked" summary of all the covered topics via headlines. Let the users chose the item they want more about and "jump" them to it. it would solve the scrolling problem. The other way would be to menu these terms.

Other than that, very well done re-design, it has much more the look of a true website now and is no longer easily identifiable as "just" a mini site.
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movingconcierge

Thanks gjsys...I'm really happy with it too. I hope it translates to visitor trust and I start getting some leads! rep+

jl255

Just some suggestions:
- main page main article cld do with a little more highlights to bring visitors' attention to the paragraph. Current header and paragraph are not attention seeking, and fonts are alittle too small and perhaps alittle too wordy.
- 'current moving news' cld do with a little sprucing up, perhaps more like a blog style with clearly separated items to make it more readable and organized

all the best with your site!

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movingconcierge

Thanks, js255 for your thorough review. I will take another look at the formatting of the text. rep +

movingconcierge

I am working on the other text items and adding better nav for the glossary and booklet. I just finished my moving links pages and would like some critique.

movingconcierge

Could I get an eye on my new amazon box store?

Mike

Lots more potential, but you lost a bit of the personal touch with the "store front" appearance. This is not necessarily bad, just a change of visual and feel of the site.

I like the specialization towards offering everything you need to have to actually move, whether this be next door or cross atlantic.
One thing you need to look at, the "Buy Moving Boxes" does definitely not display what the expectation pertaining to the tab is. Toners, Cartridges and backpacks don't qualify as moving box.

other than that, solid as usual! nice work!

movingconcierge

Thanks again, Mike. I will look at ways to soften up the store and bring it more in line with the rest of the site. I've already been tinkering (I am too old and lame to actually write the code, so I tinker with what my kick ass developer writes) - check out the search our store function when nothing is found. That's my work

nmoshana

Hi,

Your header is gorgeous. Very professional and elegant. I would definitely frame the content in the middle of the page and add a RSS feed. That same content is also very hard to understand where new content begins and ends. Your navigational menu on the left hand side has too many options. Keep it simple and reduce the menu to 5-7 items. Or separate items for sale from the content.

Best of Luck,

Ninos

WilliamKeller

only thing I would do is add a small margin between the right button bar and the content, it runs together a bit.

nice job, it looks really good