please review and give comments

shahzad11 · 03-18-2007, 05:36 AM

http://www.sayal-group.com/index.html

please review this site

thanksw in advance

Mike · 03-18-2007, 08:35 AM

Has everything in place, including the embedded email form. Functionality would be good to see.
So far, you're compact - the layout works well (for me), it's obviously about corn/grain/farm products that can be harvested - the colors represent that well, add content and maybe some more images to further emphasize the content/target of your page. At this time:

+1/2 out of 3

netguru · 03-18-2007, 09:22 AM

Nice layout. but font is not good. please change font. use verdana or arial font.

shockie · 03-18-2007, 06:16 PM

a lighter yellow might work better and the red font does not work well...

prdomainseller · 03-18-2007, 07:13 PM

the colour scheme chosen is not quite good dude
do soemthing and improve it

seven · 03-25-2007, 04:32 PM

Love the outer design, but the inner body with text and flower is very hard to read and lacks contrast.

Also, your opening paragraph lacks clarity and isn't concise. Very tough to read.

I do like how your site is very simple and you can see everything all at once.

shahzad11 · 03-27-2007, 03:21 PM

Thank you all dear brothers to help me in taking a good step in modification i my site.
I hope you will be always helpful to me and others to make thier mistake correct.

thanks alot

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Mike NamePros Expert Join Date: May 2005 Location: www.chrome.us Posts: 5,217	Has everything in place, including the embedded email form. Functionality would be good to see. So far, you're compact - the layout works well (for me), it's obviously about corn/grain/farm products that can be harvested - the colors represent that well, add content and maybe some more images to further emphasize the content/target of your page. At this time: +1/2 out of 3

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prdomainseller Account Closed Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 27	the colour scheme chosen is not quite good dude do soemthing and improve it

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shahzad11 Account Closed Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Lahore Posts: 297	Thank you all dear brothers to help me in taking a good step in modification i my site. I hope you will be always helpful to me and others to make thier mistake correct. thanks alot

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