Web Design Style #54

zzzw · 03-09-2007, 04:10 AM

check
www.ediblepanties.info
thats about business

Rufus · 03-09-2007, 04:29 AM

Didn't look like business to me. I'm missing pictures, better formatted text with subtitles and some colour.

shockie · 03-09-2007, 05:47 AM

no offense, but i've seen more engaging word documents... lol

there isn't really any design whatsoever, just one page of pasted of text separated by... are those hr lines... ?... it might be time you started working on web design style #55... first start out by creating more content so that you have enough for more than one page (at least 3 pages). after that, make some kind of menubar and resubmit here!

good luck

-Ray- · 03-09-2007, 07:04 AM

The website needs some colors.. It also needs some images..

Mike · 03-09-2007, 07:16 AM

Hate to be harsh here, but PLEASE take it down. If you have any skill level whatsoever, then what you're delivering here is an offense to your own skills.

No images, no backdrop, no branding, the topic is borderline to be of no interest at all, no user interaction, no logo....in short,...nothing but a text file?!

C'mon, i know you could do better than that. Your topic alone is on the edge of being obsolete, you HAVE to engage the user to even have a shot at being successful. ALL the items above need to be done to have some level of professional appearance... until then, take it down, place an "under construction" site there, but PLEASE when you put a under construction site up, be creative with it as well, it's your current business card that entices users to look towards the future of your website.

at this time,

-3/3

zzzw · 03-10-2007, 12:04 AM

yeah ok thanks. next time I'll ask when I have something. I'll php'ize my design and will work towards #55 version

cheers everybody.

03-09-2007, 04:10 AM	#1 (permalink)
zzzw Account Closed Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 156 0.00 NP$ (Donate)	Web Design Style #54 check www.ediblepanties.info thats about business

03-09-2007, 05:47 AM	#3 (permalink)
shockie Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 4,478 1,025.10 NP$ (Donate)	no offense, but i've seen more engaging word documents... lol there isn't really any design whatsoever, just one page of pasted of text separated by... are those hr lines... ?... it might be time you started working on web design style #55... first start out by creating more content so that you have enough for more than one page (at least 3 pages). after that, make some kind of menubar and resubmit here! good luck __________________ - shockie Linux VPS Hosting From $9.95 With A FREE Control Panel & DOUBLE Burst RAM! Monopoly Companies Binary Addition Coffee Makers & Grinders How to Wash Your Hands 5 Ways To Make Money Blogging Do You Want To Make Money Online?

03-09-2007, 07:04 AM	#4 (permalink)
-Ray- An American Soldier Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 1,630 2.53 NP$ (Donate)	The website needs some colors.. It also needs some images.. __________________ Completely Free cPanel Hosting -- Deployed to Afghanistan -- "There is no such thing as rich over-night unless you owned Google stock in 2006"

03-09-2007, 07:16 AM	#5 (permalink)
Mike NamePros Expert Join Date: May 2005 Location: www.chrome.us Posts: 5,245 46.20 NP$ (Donate)	Hate to be harsh here, but PLEASE take it down. If you have any skill level whatsoever, then what you're delivering here is an offense to your own skills. No images, no backdrop, no branding, the topic is borderline to be of no interest at all, no user interaction, no logo....in short,...nothing but a text file?! C'mon, i know you could do better than that. Your topic alone is on the edge of being obsolete, you HAVE to engage the user to even have a shot at being successful. ALL the items above need to be done to have some level of professional appearance... until then, take it down, place an "under construction" site there, but PLEASE when you put a under construction site up, be creative with it as well, it's your current business card that entices users to look towards the future of your website. at this time, -3/3 __________________ Do you Chrome? [\|] Noomle No fees & More Revenue IntelBank.com<<Your Business & Your Money>>CreditHelp.TV American Pilot Center <- Learn to Fly -> PilotCenter

03-09-2007, 04:29 AM	#2 (permalink)
Rufus New Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 11 0.00 NP$ (Donate)	Didn't look like business to me. I'm missing pictures, better formatted text with subtitles and some colour.

03-10-2007, 12:04 AM	#6 (permalink)
zzzw Account Closed Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 156 0.00 NP$ (Donate)	yeah ok thanks. next time I'll ask when I have something. I'll php'ize my design and will work towards #55 version cheers everybody.

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