Please Review - retireloaded.info

purity · 12-29-2006, 04:53 AM

Its a website providing the top 5 best ebooks and it also sells reseller right e-books

Please give me your feed back and suggestions thanks

http://retireloaded.info

AbsoluteKC · 12-29-2006, 07:32 AM

Simple and to the point

I would prefer a screen shot to every book thou.. Good Luck to your site.

purity · 12-29-2006, 08:37 AM

thanks AbsoluteKC

thats a good point but I did it so it showed the top 2 best and then the other 3 so it really gives the feeling that there are top sellers and that they are the onces i prefer

Mr. Johnson · 12-31-2006, 10:23 AM

It looks a lot like any other ebook site, albeit is a cleaner.

3 - 4 - 5 - 6

USMC_1833 · 12-31-2006, 01:07 PM

I wouldn't put a book and its review above the picture of the people on the beach.

Mike · 12-31-2006, 04:23 PM

Clean cut and easy to follow. I like it, but i'd like it even better with more information pertaining to the books. I see the visuals and a tidbit of info, not enough to entice me to buy the book though. You've done the first half (visuals) quite nicely, now you need to work on the psychological element of selling. Word your reviews along the lines of someone that you'd help to buy, not someone you sell to. It's a fine line of difference, but an essential one.
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Also, i'd make the backdrop around the "main site" a bit darker, charcoal or something along these lines, it would let the main part stand out a bit more. However, this is totally user preference and just my personal liking.

shockie · 12-31-2006, 05:44 PM

for an ebook selling site - it's good. not tremendously long with too many font sizes, colours, and HIGHLIGHTS, and all centered and...and... (suffice it to say i don't like those sites).

however, your site still retains the annoying and distracting SELLSELLSELL diction and sentences... and punctuation. i'd suggest you actually read over these ebooks, and put longer, more meaningful descriptions. the fact that your descriptions (and im using the term loosely) simply describe the ebook titles isn't a good idea, especially when the ebook titles themselves arent all that descriptive (other than of course telling me exactly how many ways i can do this or do that).
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good luck

btw, it would seem that you actually ARENT PayPal verified

oKiAo · 12-31-2006, 10:18 PM

I am not sure if it is just me or what. I don't like websites with Times New Roman as their font. Times New Roman is good if you are actually printing out the paper for real life usage. However, on web pages, I get very uncomfortable reading websites with Timse New Roman. Try to use Arial or Verdana for webpages.

If you are actually trying to sell the books. It is better not to put the ads on top of the page. It makes me feel like you are more like trying to make cash of the Google Ads then really selling the books.

You might want to use a different book image for Million Dollar Emails, I can barely see the white prints on that book cover (and it is quite book size) Which is a con to me. A book should have its slogan easy to read and see.

P.S. I mean no offense at all. Just my personal opinions.

good luck.

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purity NamePros Regular Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NSW, Australia Posts: 236	thanks AbsoluteKC thats a good point but I did it so it showed the top 2 best and then the other 3 so it really gives the feeling that there are top sellers and that they are the onces i prefer __________________ :hehe: Grab Clips - Download your favorite videos free from YouTube, iFilm, DailyMotion, Blip.tv and Break.com

12-31-2006, 10:23 AM	#4 (permalink)
Mr. Johnson NamePros Regular Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: USA Posts: 923	It looks a lot like any other ebook site, albeit is a cleaner. 3 - 4 - 5 - 6 __________________ Keep Updated

12-31-2006, 01:07 PM	#5 (permalink)
USMC_1833 NamePros Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Iraq Posts: 191	I wouldn't put a book and its review above the picture of the people on the beach.

12-31-2006, 04:23 PM	#6 (permalink)
Mike NamePros Expert Join Date: May 2005 Location: www.chrome.us Posts: 5,217	Clean cut and easy to follow. I like it, but i'd like it even better with more information pertaining to the books. I see the visuals and a tidbit of info, not enough to entice me to buy the book though. You've done the first half (visuals) quite nicely, now you need to work on the psychological element of selling. Word your reviews along the lines of someone that you'd help to buy, not someone you sell to. It's a fine line of difference, but an essential one. ????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/274433-please-review-retireloaded-info.html Also, i'd make the backdrop around the "main site" a bit darker, charcoal or something along these lines, it would let the main part stand out a bit more. However, this is totally user preference and just my personal liking.

12-31-2006, 05:44 PM	#7 (permalink)
shockie Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 4,702	for an ebook selling site - it's good. not tremendously long with too many font sizes, colours, and HIGHLIGHTS, and all centered and...and... (suffice it to say i don't like those sites). however, your site still retains the annoying and distracting SELLSELLSELL diction and sentences... and punctuation. i'd suggest you actually read over these ebooks, and put longer, more meaningful descriptions. the fact that your descriptions (and im using the term loosely) simply describe the ebook titles isn't a good idea, especially when the ebook titles themselves arent all that descriptive (other than of course telling me exactly how many ways i can do this or do that). ????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/showthread.php?t=274433 good luck btw, it would seem that you actually ARENT PayPal verified

12-31-2006, 10:18 PM	#8 (permalink)
oKiAo NamePros Regular Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Planet Earth Posts: 778	I am not sure if it is just me or what. I don't like websites with Times New Roman as their font. Times New Roman is good if you are actually printing out the paper for real life usage. However, on web pages, I get very uncomfortable reading websites with Timse New Roman. Try to use Arial or Verdana for webpages. If you are actually trying to sell the books. It is better not to put the ads on top of the page. It makes me feel like you are more like trying to make cash of the Google Ads then really selling the books. You might want to use a different book image for Million Dollar Emails, I can barely see the white prints on that book cover (and it is quite book size) Which is a con to me. A book should have its slogan easy to read and see. P.S. I mean no offense at all. Just my personal opinions. good luck.

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