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Old 12-29-2006, 03:53 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Please Review - retireloaded.info

Its a website providing the top 5 best ebooks and it also sells reseller right e-books

Please give me your feed back and suggestions thanks

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Old 12-29-2006, 06:32 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Simple and to the point

I would prefer a screen shot to every book thou.. Good Luck to your site.
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thanks AbsoluteKC

thats a good point but I did it so it showed the top 2 best and then the other 3 so it really gives the feeling that there are top sellers and that they are the onces i prefer
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It looks a lot like any other ebook site, albeit is a cleaner.

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Clean cut and easy to follow. I like it, but i'd like it even better with more information pertaining to the books. I see the visuals and a tidbit of info, not enough to entice me to buy the book though. You've done the first half (visuals) quite nicely, now you need to work on the psychological element of selling. Word your reviews along the lines of someone that you'd help to buy, not someone you sell to. It's a fine line of difference, but an essential one.

Also, i'd make the backdrop around the "main site" a bit darker, charcoal or something along these lines, it would let the main part stand out a bit more. However, this is totally user preference and just my personal liking.
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for an ebook selling site - it's good. not tremendously long with too many font sizes, colours, and HIGHLIGHTS, and all centered and...and... (suffice it to say i don't like those sites).

however, your site still retains the annoying and distracting SELLSELLSELL diction and sentences... and punctuation. i'd suggest you actually read over these ebooks, and put longer, more meaningful descriptions. the fact that your descriptions (and im using the term loosely) simply describe the ebook titles isn't a good idea, especially when the ebook titles themselves arent all that descriptive (other than of course telling me exactly how many ways i can do this or do that).

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btw, it would seem that you actually ARENT PayPal verified
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I am not sure if it is just me or what. I don't like websites with Times New Roman as their font. Times New Roman is good if you are actually printing out the paper for real life usage. However, on web pages, I get very uncomfortable reading websites with Timse New Roman. Try to use Arial or Verdana for webpages.

If you are actually trying to sell the books. It is better not to put the ads on top of the page. It makes me feel like you are more like trying to make cash of the Google Ads then really selling the books.

You might want to use a different book image for Million Dollar Emails, I can barely see the white prints on that book cover (and it is quite book size) Which is a con to me. A book should have its slogan easy to read and see.

P.S. I mean no offense at all. Just my personal opinions. good luck.
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