Please Review!!

H-O-V · 11-11-2006, 01:02 PM

Site: antibodypatterns.com

I have just finished sorting out a site for someone and I would appriciate feedback. (Check pages under Brain + Other diseases - others aren't finished yet) . The site is a scientific site, dealing with immune diseases.

Thanks,

- Mutasim

dudeman · 11-11-2006, 02:11 PM

the top logo is good, but the text is spread out 100% which isnt good because people cant read like that very well

H-O-V · 11-12-2006, 01:24 AM

Thanks Dudeman, hopefully will sort text problem. Anyone else

- Mutasim

Cobalt · 11-12-2006, 01:35 AM

Originally Posted by Mutasim

Thanks Dudeman, hopefully will sort text problem. Anyone else
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- Mutasim

Definetly need to fix the text, its hard to review such a site as there really isn't a "pattern" layout.

To me it is just a header with no body space and ads.

On the header, the text/gradiant flow is nice but would be better if there were a backround/border to it.

Needs more work and I am sure you are not finished, good luck on the site and I will definetly stop back for another look once you've got some of the stuff updated/fixed.

Good Luck,

Casey

H-O-V · 11-12-2006, 06:13 AM

Cobalt - No 100% sure what you are talking about

I have changed the table size - it is now to full screen on a 19" monitor - lol

- Mutasim

H-O-V · 11-21-2006, 01:40 PM

is taht all?

H-O-V · 11-24-2006, 02:25 PM

hey guys! can you please review - all of the suggested changes have been made, can you analyis the site and give contructive feeback please.

- Mutasim

dudeman · 11-24-2006, 03:16 PM

I would lose the scolling text.

some of the navigation hovers over other parts which isnt good. You might use a side nav with pullouts that go the side of it.

Dont use too much italics its hard to read if you use too much. Also the red text looks like links.

something in the content area on the homepage needs to pop out also, use bigger text or something for a very brief site summary or something.

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11-24-2006, 02:25 PM	THREAD STARTER #7 (permalink)
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11-24-2006, 03:16 PM	#8 (permalink)
dudeman NamePros Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: USA Posts: 114	I would lose the scolling text. some of the navigation hovers over other parts which isnt good. You might use a side nav with pullouts that go the side of it. Dont use too much italics its hard to read if you use too much. Also the red text looks like links. something in the content area on the homepage needs to pop out also, use bigger text or something for a very brief site summary or something. __________________ windows xp pro * firefox * php * mysql * apache

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