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jamieharrop14 · 03-27-2004, 11:43 AM

Hi, could you give me a few comments on http://www.wy-media.co.uk please

Anthony · 03-28-2004, 03:38 AM

Its a good start -- all the basics are there -- but it doesn't really pop out like it needs to. I think you need to add more graphical elements, especially to the background of the teal boxes on the right. Also, try refining your logo so it is more compact and so the flower seems more attached to the words. Good start!

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Anthony NamePros Expert Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: NYC Posts: 9,201 26.71 NP$ (Donate)	Its a good start -- all the basics are there -- but it doesn't really pop out like it needs to. I think you need to add more graphical elements, especially to the background of the teal boxes on the right. Also, try refining your logo so it is more compact and so the flower seems more attached to the words. Good start!

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