Please review my site

goldsgym · 03-23-2004, 06:21 PM

http://www4.desales.edu/~bb02/TEST/club

The site is not completely done yet. There are various links which need to be completed. Anyways, my question is how much should i charge the owner of the 3 gyms - I have not come up with a price yet for him. Also, do you like t
he design and layout - anythign that should be changed? (I know there is no style sheet....) Thanks in advance for your comments. (my main concern is the price to charge)

Anthony · 03-23-2004, 11:09 PM

I think you have a great start there and may be able to charge hundreds for the site, but you need to really add a professional touch to it.

Check out http://www.ballyfitness.com/ to see what I mean.

identity_00 · 03-23-2004, 11:40 PM

why not just make one like goldsgym?

Anthony · 03-23-2004, 11:59 PM

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Originally posted by identity_00
why not just make one like goldsgym?

Have you seen GoldsGym.com? Not the best designed website I've seen for a gym. Anyway, this seems to be a design for separate franchises of Golds Gym.

goldsgym · 03-24-2004, 02:08 PM

I have updated my site. Change the background color. Font faces. Added some more information. Updated the gymfront images. added CSS for links and changed link sizes.

TWM · 03-25-2004, 05:52 AM

I would agree with Anthony, it definatly needs to be more professional. I think yellow can sometimes be a professional color, but not in the quantity that you have it in. Try adding another color to balance it out. I think that will do the trick.

goldsgym · 03-25-2004, 05:22 PM

I have been messing around with the site. And here is the new design I have. Let me know if you like it.

http://www4.desales.edu/~bb02/TEST/test

painperdu · 03-25-2004, 07:04 PM

It's fast and no needless flash -I like it.

Use less yellow and darken the foreground box a bit.

viciouscircle · 03-25-2004, 07:45 PM

i agree, you need to use less yellow. maybe add a blue to offset some of the yellow. other than that, its rather nice.

goldsgym · 03-25-2004, 08:06 PM

I think the site layout is done for sure now. What do you guys think? Also, how much should i charge the owner for this site?? When the site is complete it will be 20+ pages.

FINAL LAYOUT:
http://www4.desales.edu/~bb02/TEST/club.html

Anthony · 03-25-2004, 10:43 PM

I like the improvements you've made, but I would try to blend the three location photos better. The white space between them doesn't work so well.

What other pages will be developed for this site?

goldsgym · 03-26-2004, 07:11 AM

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Originally posted by Anthony
I like the improvements you've made, but I would try to blend the three location photos better. The white space between them doesn't work so well.

What other pages will be developed for this site?

There will be 3 more pages for a staff section for each gym. There will be 3 more pages for a tour section for each gym. There will be 3 pages for aerobic schedules for each gym. As well as a club hours page, daycare hours page, employment page, and promotion page. All together teh website will be about 18-20 pages.

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goldsgym New Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: New Jersey Posts: 23 34.00 NP$ (Donate)	Please review my site http://www4.desales.edu/~bb02/TEST/club The site is not completely done yet. There are various links which need to be completed. Anyways, my question is how much should i charge the owner of the 3 gyms - I have not come up with a price yet for him. Also, do you like t he design and layout - anythign that should be changed? (I know there is no style sheet....) Thanks in advance for your comments. (my main concern is the price to charge)

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goldsgym New Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: New Jersey Posts: 23 34.00 NP$ (Donate)	I have been messing around with the site. And here is the new design I have. Let me know if you like it. http://www4.desales.edu/~bb02/TEST/test __________________ Professional Web Design & Development eWebDevelopment

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Anthony NamePros Expert Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: NYC Posts: 9,201 26.71 NP$ (Donate)	I think you have a great start there and may be able to charge hundreds for the site, but you need to really add a professional touch to it. Check out http://www.ballyfitness.com/ to see what I mean.

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identity_00 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Tacoma, WA Posts: 1,216 195.20 NP$ (Donate)	why not just make one like goldsgym?

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goldsgym New Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: New Jersey Posts: 23 34.00 NP$ (Donate)	I think the site layout is done for sure now. What do you guys think? Also, how much should i charge the owner for this site?? When the site is complete it will be 20+ pages. FINAL LAYOUT: http://www4.desales.edu/~bb02/TEST/club.html __________________ Professional Web Design & Development eWebDevelopment

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Anthony NamePros Expert Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: NYC Posts: 9,201 26.71 NP$ (Donate)	I like the improvements you've made, but I would try to blend the three location photos better. The white space between them doesn't work so well. What other pages will be developed for this site?

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