critique please

KidVeeDublu · 03-22-2004, 10:34 AM

hey everyone, im workin on the design for our portfolio ....this is the html version there are a few things we are considering (for one-scaling the site down about 80 % for lower res moniters) but help out guys please!
www.clutchgraphics.com/test/home.htm

viciouscircle · 03-22-2004, 11:00 AM

very nice. my only thoughts would be to put the about us and contact links with the navigataion across the top, and to do something with the empty area at the bottom.

John Kennedy · 03-22-2004, 11:31 AM

Very nice, I like the cityscape in the background and I like the different shades of green that you have used.

The only negative things I can say are that the logo looks a liitle out of place among all the green and I have a horizontal scrollbar appearing at the bottom of the screen that goes nowhere.

I'm running IE6 at 1024x768.

KidVeeDublu · 03-22-2004, 12:53 PM

thanks...the logo is still in the works..i am trying to offset the color to make the logo stand out....im not sure about it either...as for the scrolling ,thats why i was thinking about scaling it 80% down ..the master is created 1000 pixels wide with my info safety at 750. by scaling it down it would put the main table in that 800 pixel mark..would it detract from design at high res??

Anthony · 03-24-2004, 12:13 AM

The look and layout of the site is unique, but it looks a little too casual to be a business site. Maybe try defining the layout a little more and work with a stronger font.

TWM · 03-25-2004, 06:55 AM

Logo stands out, and text is kind of plain. I love the city skape, but try and fix the spelling in the logo, unless thats correct

03-22-2004, 10:34 AM	THREAD STARTER #1 (permalink)
KidVeeDublu NamePros Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: new jersey Posts: 48	critique please hey everyone, im workin on the design for our portfolio ....this is the html version there are a few things we are considering (for one-scaling the site down about 80 % for lower res moniters) but help out guys please! www.clutchgraphics.com/test/home.htm

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viciouscircle Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Denton, Texas and Springfield, Virginia Posts: 1,780	very nice. my only thoughts would be to put the about us and contact links with the navigataion across the top, and to do something with the empty area at the bottom. __________________ SimplyDelivered.net - E-mail Marketing made Simple! [ Infintium.net \| KwikSEO.com \| WeeklyComic.com \| Xf3.org ]

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TWM Web Marketing Specialist Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Texas, USA Posts: 1,335	Logo stands out, and text is kind of plain. I love the city skape, but try and fix the spelling in the logo, unless thats correct __________________ TargetedWebMarketing.com : Web Marketing Plans - Search Engine Optimization - Online Promotion coraltanks.com l Corporate Quarters

03-22-2004, 11:31 AM	#3 (permalink)
John Kennedy NamePros Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Greenock, Scotland Posts: 26	Very nice, I like the cityscape in the background and I like the different shades of green that you have used. The only negative things I can say are that the logo looks a liitle out of place among all the green and I have a horizontal scrollbar appearing at the bottom of the screen that goes nowhere. I'm running IE6 at 1024x768.

03-22-2004, 12:53 PM	THREAD STARTER #4 (permalink)
KidVeeDublu NamePros Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: new jersey Posts: 48	thanks...the logo is still in the works..i am trying to offset the color to make the logo stand out....im not sure about it either...as for the scrolling ,thats why i was thinking about scaling it 80% down ..the master is created 1000 pixels wide with my info safety at 750. by scaling it down it would put the main table in that 800 pixel mark..would it detract from design at high res??

03-24-2004, 12:13 AM	#5 (permalink)
Anthony NamePros Expert Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: NYC Posts: 9,134	The look and layout of the site is unique, but it looks a little too casual to be a business site. Maybe try defining the layout a little more and work with a stronger font.

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