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Old 03-15-2004, 01:16 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Pro looking logo needs feedback

Just let me know what you think of this. I'm fairly new and just want some feedback. Thanks.
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Old 03-15-2004, 04:49 PM   #2 (permalink)
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It looks incomplete.

Also, the 'N' is falling into the abiss.
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Old 03-15-2004, 05:16 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Too big of a gap with your voting categories IMO.

Maybe something like...

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Old 03-15-2004, 06:26 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Please elaborate on what you mean by the 'n' falling into the abyss.
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Old 03-15-2004, 08:19 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I'll be updating the graphic tomorrow morning and I will post the revised copy up here for you guys to critique. Thanks for your time and please offer suggestions for the revision.

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Old 03-16-2004, 07:12 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Here's the slightly revised version of the image. I just centered it because I had comments that it was "incomplete" so I thought this would make it seem more complete. I have it available in different colors. Contact me via e-mail with an appropriate subject or IM me on AIM: dear claudio 33. Thank you.
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The E is rubbing the line now. Maybe make the orange boxes resemble the letters D A N.
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Old 03-16-2004, 07:17 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Its hard to notice/tell that the brown/orange areas are letters, perhaps make the overall image smaller as well...

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Old 03-16-2004, 01:08 PM   #9 (permalink)
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jh3, they orange boxes resemble the letter 'D a n' already. What what do you mean by rubbing the line?

the funny thing is, I didn't even mean to have the orange boxes represent 'D a n.' It's like my subconscious was doing it.. weird.
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yea you should have though more about where you wanted to position your letters. the n looks like its all by itself.

the orange boxes are cool except the black that surrounds them is too much. you need to bring it alot closer to the boxes.
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i like the idea of it, but id have used the space a bit better, say put your name in the first orange block, and the line pattern in the third, to balance it a bit. but the concept is good.
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Old 03-18-2004, 07:32 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Is this a little better? I took into consider your advice, ivory, and moved the strip over. I also put some pattern lines in the boxes to give them a little more 'umph.'
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It look okay, but I don't really think the boxes resemble D A N very much... Also, try putting something else in the first and last boxes!
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