Pro looking logo needs feedback

sickle · 03-15-2004, 02:16 PM

Just let me know what you think of this. I'm fairly new and just want some feedback. Thanks.

painperdu · 03-15-2004, 05:49 PM

It looks incomplete.

Also, the 'N' is falling into the abiss.

Coastalguy · 03-15-2004, 06:16 PM

Too big of a gap with your voting categories IMO.

Maybe something like...

Great
Good
Eh
Ew

Good-luck,
ST

sickle · 03-15-2004, 07:26 PM

Please elaborate on what you mean by the 'n' falling into the abyss.

sickle · 03-15-2004, 09:19 PM

I'll be updating the graphic tomorrow morning and I will post the revised copy up here for you guys to critique. Thanks for your time and please offer suggestions for the revision.

-sickle

sickle · 03-16-2004, 08:12 AM

Here's the slightly revised version of the image. I just centered it because I had comments that it was "incomplete" so I thought this would make it seem more complete. I have it available in different colors. Contact me via e-mail with an appropriate subject or IM me on AIM: dear claudio 33. Thank you.

Ja$on · 03-16-2004, 08:15 AM

The E is rubbing the line now. Maybe make the orange boxes resemble the letters D A N.

Tippy · 03-16-2004, 08:17 AM

Its hard to notice/tell that the brown/orange areas are letters, perhaps make the overall image smaller as well...

Mike

sickle · 03-16-2004, 02:08 PM

jh3, they orange boxes resemble the letter 'D a n' already. What what do you mean by rubbing the line?

the funny thing is, I didn't even mean to have the orange boxes represent 'D a n.' It's like my subconscious was doing it.. weird.

phr3sh · 03-16-2004, 06:33 PM

yea you should have though more about where you wanted to position your letters. the n looks like its all by itself.

the orange boxes are cool except the black that surrounds them is too much. you need to bring it alot closer to the boxes.

-ivory- · 03-18-2004, 05:31 PM

i like the idea of it, but id have used the space a bit better, say put your name in the first orange block, and the line pattern in the third, to balance it a bit. but the concept is good.

sickle · 03-18-2004, 08:32 PM

Is this a little better? I took into consider your advice, ivory, and moved the strip over. I also put some pattern lines in the boxes to give them a little more 'umph.'

Anthony · 03-19-2004, 12:11 AM

It look okay, but I don't really think the boxes resemble D A N very much... Also, try putting something else in the first and last boxes!

View Poll Results: Do you like it?
Great	1	11.11%
Eh...	6	66.67%
Ew	2	22.22%
Voters: 9. You may not vote on this poll

03-15-2004, 05:49 PM	#2 (permalink)
painperdu NamePros Regular Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Louisiana, USA Posts: 658	It looks incomplete. Also, the 'N' is falling into the abiss. __________________ dotbob.com -Cheap Domain Name Registrations/Unlimited Web Hosting Plan $5.98/month

03-15-2004, 06:16 PM	#3 (permalink)
Coastalguy NamePros Expert Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Great White North Posts: 6,981	Too big of a gap with your voting categories IMO. Maybe something like... Great Good Eh Ew Good-luck, ST __________________ FOR SALE: MLSHomes.org/MLSRealEstate.tv/VWTH.com

03-16-2004, 08:15 AM	#7 (permalink)
Ja$on Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: San Diego Posts: 2,889	The E is rubbing the line now. Maybe make the orange boxes resemble the letters D A N. __________________ Dudster.com \| Domain Names For Sale

03-18-2004, 05:31 PM	#11 (permalink)
-ivory- New Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Scotland Posts: 9	i like the idea of it, but id have used the space a bit better, say put your name in the first orange block, and the line pattern in the third, to balance it a bit. but the concept is good. __________________ http://www.avatarsbydesign.com

03-15-2004, 07:26 PM	THREAD STARTER #4 (permalink)
sickle New Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 12	Please elaborate on what you mean by the 'n' falling into the abyss.

03-15-2004, 09:19 PM	THREAD STARTER #5 (permalink)
sickle New Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 12	I'll be updating the graphic tomorrow morning and I will post the revised copy up here for you guys to critique. Thanks for your time and please offer suggestions for the revision. -sickle

03-16-2004, 08:17 AM	#8 (permalink)
Tippy NamePros Expert Join Date: May 2003 Location: Montreal Posts: 7,019	Its hard to notice/tell that the brown/orange areas are letters, perhaps make the overall image smaller as well... Mike

03-16-2004, 02:08 PM	THREAD STARTER #9 (permalink)
sickle New Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 12	jh3, they orange boxes resemble the letter 'D a n' already. What what do you mean by rubbing the line? the funny thing is, I didn't even mean to have the orange boxes represent 'D a n.' It's like my subconscious was doing it.. weird.

03-16-2004, 06:33 PM	#10 (permalink)
phr3sh New Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 2	yea you should have though more about where you wanted to position your letters. the n looks like its all by itself. the orange boxes are cool except the black that surrounds them is too much. you need to bring it alot closer to the boxes.

03-19-2004, 12:11 AM	#13 (permalink)
Anthony NamePros Expert Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: NYC Posts: 9,134	It look okay, but I don't really think the boxes resemble D A N very much... Also, try putting something else in the first and last boxes!

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