critique please

wonpwn · 03-10-2004, 03:50 AM

i made this page for a client a few days ago, thought maybe i could get some comments on it. thanks

http://www.howesoundrealtor.com

Anthony · 03-10-2004, 07:14 PM

It works well as a business card type site, but you might want to work more on making the menu options stand out. Since the person's head is so large, it takes a lot of the attention away from the left side, so you'll need to compensate by enhancing the menus look. Nice look.

vation · 03-16-2004, 01:58 PM

I would have to agree with Anthony. The head is a little on the large side. I really do like how you dealt with the sub menus and made them go to the left of the main button. very nice touch.

TWM · 03-16-2004, 08:18 PM

The head IS just a little to big, but a professional looking design it is.
On your sub pages, try a different font, it decreases the sleakness of the site to see large, standing out text, but then again, its just my opinion

Anthony · 03-17-2004, 10:14 PM

So I guess the moral of the story is that a big head can ruin business, but a properly proportioned head will bring in a lot of cash?

John Kennedy · 03-18-2004, 07:24 AM

The think the graphics and colour scheme you have used throughout the site look great. The large head doesn't bother me as it loads very quickly. However, unlike vation I find that the navigation opening to the left awkward.

Anthony · 03-19-2004, 12:14 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by John Kennedy
The think the graphics and colour scheme you have used throughout the site look great. The large head doesn't bother me as it loads very quickly. However, unlike vation I find that the navigation opening to the left awkward.

I don't think the loading time of the big head is why people have been bringing it up... I think its because the head is as big as the screen!

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vation NamePros Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 29	I would have to agree with Anthony. The head is a little on the large side. I really do like how you dealt with the sub menus and made them go to the left of the main button. very nice touch. __________________ http://www.threecell.com http://www.stillloading.com

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TWM Web Marketing Specialist Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Texas, USA Posts: 1,335	The head IS just a little to big, but a professional looking design it is. On your sub pages, try a different font, it decreases the sleakness of the site to see large, standing out text, but then again, its just my opinion __________________ TargetedWebMarketing.com : Web Marketing Plans - Search Engine Optimization - Online Promotion coraltanks.com l Corporate Quarters

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Anthony NamePros Expert Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: NYC Posts: 9,134	It works well as a business card type site, but you might want to work more on making the menu options stand out. Since the person's head is so large, it takes a lot of the attention away from the left side, so you'll need to compensate by enhancing the menus look. Nice look.

03-17-2004, 10:14 PM	#5 (permalink)
Anthony NamePros Expert Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: NYC Posts: 9,134	So I guess the moral of the story is that a big head can ruin business, but a properly proportioned head will bring in a lot of cash?

03-18-2004, 07:24 AM	#6 (permalink)
John Kennedy NamePros Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Greenock, Scotland Posts: 26	The think the graphics and colour scheme you have used throughout the site look great. The large head doesn't bother me as it loads very quickly. However, unlike vation I find that the navigation opening to the left awkward.

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