Critique Please

xareon · 03-07-2004, 01:05 AM

I'm new to the graphic design aspect of web design, programming being my first calling. I would be thrilled if some of you with a more artistic eye would take a look at www.seniorinsurance-usa.com and let me know what you think. Any suggestions are welcome!

Thanks!
Tennyson

Anthony · 03-07-2004, 11:49 PM

Not bad for your first foray into design. The rollovers work and the look is pretty good. Try saving the logo at a higher level because there is some fragmenting.

adam_uk · 03-08-2004, 09:46 AM

"the connection was refused when connectiong to www.seniorinsurance-usa.com"

worked second time tho

looks nice, index page is a bit empty tho

xareon · 03-08-2004, 09:59 PM

Thanks for your comments. I've made some changes (though I haven't posted them yet. I'm wondering what you think about my alternate side bar http://landsofblight.com/seniorinsur...ons/altbar.jpg which do you prefer?

Anthony · 03-14-2004, 10:56 PM

What's the difference in the alternate version?

xareon · 03-16-2004, 12:28 PM

Ok... so I have made some changes to my website, I've added content, changed the side bar, and sliced/optimized the top bar. Can anybody tell me if they can see any other problems? Is the color scheme for the content ok?

03-07-2004, 01:05 AM	#1 (permalink)
xareon New Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Reno, NV Posts: 5 7.00 NP$ (Donate)	Critique Please I'm new to the graphic design aspect of web design, programming being my first calling. I would be thrilled if some of you with a more artistic eye would take a look at www.seniorinsurance-usa.com and let me know what you think. Any suggestions are welcome! Thanks! Tennyson

03-07-2004, 11:49 PM	#2 (permalink)
Anthony NamePros Expert Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: NYC Posts: 9,201 26.71 NP$ (Donate)	Not bad for your first foray into design. The rollovers work and the look is pretty good. Try saving the logo at a higher level because there is some fragmenting.

03-08-2004, 09:46 AM	#3 (permalink)
adam_uk Senior Member Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 2,211 6,170.25 NP$ (Donate)	"the connection was refused when connectiong to www.seniorinsurance-usa.com" worked second time tho looks nice, index page is a bit empty tho

03-08-2004, 09:59 PM	#4 (permalink)
xareon New Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Reno, NV Posts: 5 7.00 NP$ (Donate)	Thanks for your comments. I've made some changes (though I haven't posted them yet. I'm wondering what you think about my alternate side bar http://landsofblight.com/seniorinsur...ons/altbar.jpg which do you prefer?

03-14-2004, 10:56 PM	#5 (permalink)
Anthony NamePros Expert Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: NYC Posts: 9,201 26.71 NP$ (Donate)	What's the difference in the alternate version?

03-16-2004, 12:28 PM	#6 (permalink)
xareon New Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Reno, NV Posts: 5 7.00 NP$ (Donate)	Ok... so I have made some changes to my website, I've added content, changed the side bar, and sliced/optimized the top bar. Can anybody tell me if they can see any other problems? Is the color scheme for the content ok?

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