Landing Page

Roenick · 03-02-2004, 07:13 AM

hi everyone,

www.breakawayltd.com is a landing page for a company whose specialty is computer game design and military/government war simulations.

the design seeks to showcase the synergy of the company's talents in these two parallel yet distinct markets.

please review and let me know your likes/dislikes, pros/cons, and suggestions for improvements.

thanks in advance!

Tippy · 03-02-2004, 08:11 AM

I think it looks pritty darn good

Mike

Pablo · 03-02-2004, 10:35 AM

Very professional and good color scheme, only thing that could add a zing, so to speak. would be a drop menu

Pro: As i said, professional and color, easy to nav around. good gfx's.

Con: Green bar at the top with company, employment and contact. the font is abit small to read. As well as the gaming/goverment bit right at the top, light gray aint best color needs to be abit darker and possible bigger font.

chaosbox · 03-02-2004, 12:20 PM

very professional site...very few sites actually use flash in a productive way hats off, just add more color...its a little bland in that department

Anthony · 03-03-2004, 01:12 AM

Nice look to that. I like how that blue blends so well with the other colors! Great job!

Cory · 03-06-2004, 07:17 AM

Thumbs up all the way. Great job using images in the banners in a subtle way to draw interest to the page. Great use of color on your content areas with gray borders. I especially like the high contrast blue navigation bar. I agree with some of the other posters about some font sizes and the out-of-place green nav bar.

Great use of subtle design elements such as the dotted-line header scores and ample white space.

Amazingly attractive site.

TWM · 03-06-2004, 05:28 PM

very professional and i like it alot..... nice plain too... did yall make that? i like it

yes, drop down menus would add a nice effect

Roenick · 03-08-2004, 07:51 AM

thanks guys, i appreciate all the great feedback.

garrett, the jet was created by a 3D artist on staff in 3DS Max. two files were output (one wireframe and one fully textured) and these were blended in PhotoShop for the finished graphic.

Anthony · 03-14-2004, 10:59 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Roenick
thanks guys, i appreciate all the great feedback.

garrett, the jet was created by a 3D artist on staff in 3DS Max. two files were output (one wireframe and one fully textured) and these were blended in PhotoShop for the finished graphic.

Cool jet! Great idea to blend the two, it looks very realistic, too!

03-02-2004, 07:13 AM	#1 (permalink)
Roenick NamePros Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Baltimore/Washington D.C. Posts: 49 37.00 NP$ (Donate)	Landing Page hi everyone, www.breakawayltd.com is a landing page for a company whose specialty is computer game design and military/government war simulations. the design seeks to showcase the synergy of the company's talents in these two parallel yet distinct markets. please review and let me know your likes/dislikes, pros/cons, and suggestions for improvements. thanks in advance! Last edited by Roenick; 03-02-2004 at 10:56 AM.

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Tippy NamePros Expert Join Date: May 2003 Location: XXX Posts: 6,446 357.00 NP$ (Donate)	I think it looks pritty darn good Mike __________________ My Domains : JustRegged SportyBetting GroupOwned VidEditing WeDoFinancing CheapoMovies FellowDomainers HeavenlyDishes MoneyBacking iMovs ILoveGiving OldiesTube MrAndMr House.ws Maps.st etc...

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Pablo NamePros Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 44 80.00 NP$ (Donate)	Very professional and good color scheme, only thing that could add a zing, so to speak. would be a drop menu Pro: As i said, professional and color, easy to nav around. good gfx's. Con: Green bar at the top with company, employment and contact. the font is abit small to read. As well as the gaming/goverment bit right at the top, light gray aint best color needs to be abit darker and possible bigger font. __________________ Click Link for Java IRC PHP-Live IRC: pgardner.net:6667, Channel: #php.

03-06-2004, 07:17 AM	#6 (permalink)
Cory New Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: New Windsor, MD Posts: 4 8.00 NP$ (Donate)	Thumbs up all the way. Great job using images in the banners in a subtle way to draw interest to the page. Great use of color on your content areas with gray borders. I especially like the high contrast blue navigation bar. I agree with some of the other posters about some font sizes and the out-of-place green nav bar. Great use of subtle design elements such as the dotted-line header scores and ample white space. Amazingly attractive site. Last edited by Cory; 03-06-2004 at 07:41 AM.

03-06-2004, 05:28 PM	#7 (permalink)
TWM Web Marketing Specialist Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Texas, USA Posts: 1,336 418.50 NP$ (Donate)	very professional and i like it alot..... nice plain too... did yall make that? i like it yes, drop down menus would add a nice effect __________________ TargetedWebMarketing.com : Web Marketing Plans - Search Engine Optimization - Online Promotion coraltanks.com l Top 25 Beaches Web Related Resources - Save Money

03-02-2004, 12:20 PM	#4 (permalink)
chaosbox NamePros Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 36 70.00 NP$ (Donate)	very professional site...very few sites actually use flash in a productive way hats off, just add more color...its a little bland in that department

03-03-2004, 01:12 AM	#5 (permalink)
Anthony NamePros Expert Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: NYC Posts: 9,201 26.71 NP$ (Donate)	Nice look to that. I like how that blue blends so well with the other colors! Great job!

03-08-2004, 07:51 AM	#8 (permalink)
Roenick NamePros Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Baltimore/Washington D.C. Posts: 49 37.00 NP$ (Donate)	thanks guys, i appreciate all the great feedback. garrett, the jet was created by a 3D artist on staff in 3DS Max. two files were output (one wireframe and one fully textured) and these were blended in PhotoShop for the finished graphic. __________________ " be the change you wish to see in the world " – gandhi

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