Please help me improve this store...

Richieboy67 · 06-21-2006, 08:19 AM

I have not put much time into this yet but this summer I plan on redoing the whole thing.....

I am looking for ideas etc .....

http://www.anonlinemall.com

I know right now it is not much to look at but I am looking for ideas on what would make it better....... telling me how bad it looks now will not help....

Thanks

fmauniverse · 06-21-2006, 09:45 AM

Hi. First of all, the template looks good, just needs a bit editing. You could add more colours where there is white and you need to fix the banner as the text under US section is over the border. Second, the shop script looks good. Well done on that.

Overall Rating: 8/10

Need to work on the layout a bit.

Good luck with your site!

If you like my review and comments, you can add rep for me.

Regards.

Richieboy67 · 06-21-2006, 04:09 PM

Thanks... Rep added.. I appreciate it..

antman · 06-22-2006, 12:31 AM

Site: An Online MallOnline

Praise
[^] Great variety
[^] Caterogised well
[^] Detailed reviews
[^] Images for items well done
[^] Decent pricing

Things to Fix
[!] Needs a banner
[!] Too many ads! If you want ads, don't have too many of them
[!] Needs a logo and/or favicon
[!] Needs a "Recommended" or "Most Purchased" page
[!] 'Find Out More Info' for certain pages don't work
[!] Grammar errors such as "If your from the UK please" (Should be you're)
[!] http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/9342/aom9fo.jpg < The red rectangles indicate areas where the page design needs to be fixed. The arrow on the right indicates that there should either be an ad placed there, or the text box covering that area too.

It's a new concept of online shopping, and there are some great parts completed. Hopefully my feedback will aid your site in becoming more popular. Good luck

Review by antman. All sites are accessed on Mozilla Firefox with a screen resolution of 1280x1024. If you have found my review helpful, please feel free to donate NP$ or add reputation. Thanks.

kindigo · 06-22-2006, 02:09 AM

Your top banner exceeds the black border, you can either make your banner smaller or make your black border bigger.

Your top banner is too plain, only texts and no images.

Too much ads, 2 or 3 is enough

Richieboy67 · 06-22-2006, 12:15 PM

Thank you all so much. I knew there was a reason why I am always here...lol

I will follow this advice..... all of it is very good.

Thanks again...

Richieboy67 · 06-24-2006, 08:28 PM

I have made a few changes.... I would love to hear how I did...

Thanks..

http://www.anonlinemall.com/

06-21-2006, 08:19 AM	#1 (permalink)
Richieboy67 Account Closed Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: East Coast USA Posts: 840 0.93 NP$ (Donate)	Please help me improve this store... I have not put much time into this yet but this summer I plan on redoing the whole thing..... I am looking for ideas etc ..... http://www.anonlinemall.com I know right now it is not much to look at but I am looking for ideas on what would make it better....... telling me how bad it looks now will not help.... Thanks

06-21-2006, 09:45 AM	#2 (permalink)
fmauniverse Account Closed Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 584 0.00 NP$ (Donate)	Site review Hi. First of all, the template looks good, just needs a bit editing. You could add more colours where there is white and you need to fix the banner as the text under US section is over the border. Second, the shop script looks good. Well done on that. Overall Rating: 8/10 Need to work on the layout a bit. Good luck with your site! If you like my review and comments, you can add rep for me. Regards.

06-22-2006, 12:31 AM	#4 (permalink)
antman < Custom User Title > Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Australia Posts: 2,389 919.89 NP$ (Donate)	Site: An Online MallOnline Praise [^] Great variety [^] Caterogised well [^] Detailed reviews [^] Images for items well done [^] Decent pricing Things to Fix [!] Needs a banner [!] Too many ads! If you want ads, don't have too many of them [!] Needs a logo and/or favicon [!] Needs a "Recommended" or "Most Purchased" page [!] 'Find Out More Info' for certain pages don't work [!] Grammar errors such as "If your from the UK please" (Should be you're) [!] http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/9342/aom9fo.jpg < The red rectangles indicate areas where the page design needs to be fixed. The arrow on the right indicates that there should either be an ad placed there, or the text box covering that area too. It's a new concept of online shopping, and there are some great parts completed. Hopefully my feedback will aid your site in becoming more popular. Good luck Review by antman. All sites are accessed on Mozilla Firefox with a screen resolution of 1280x1024. If you have found my review helpful, please feel free to donate NP$ or add reputation. Thanks. __________________ █ My Portfolio █ Content Creation █ Joomla Services

06-22-2006, 02:09 AM	#5 (permalink)
kindigo NamePros Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 77 156.00 NP$ (Donate)	Your top banner exceeds the black border, you can either make your banner smaller or make your black border bigger. Your top banner is too plain, only texts and no images. Too much ads, 2 or 3 is enough __________________ http://kindigo.mesdouri.com/ Animation tutorials, articles and movies

06-21-2006, 04:09 PM	#3 (permalink)
Richieboy67 Account Closed Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: East Coast USA Posts: 840 0.93 NP$ (Donate)	Thanks... Rep added.. I appreciate it..

06-22-2006, 12:15 PM	#6 (permalink)
Richieboy67 Account Closed Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: East Coast USA Posts: 840 0.93 NP$ (Donate)	Thank you all so much. I knew there was a reason why I am always here...lol I will follow this advice..... all of it is very good. Thanks again...

06-24-2006, 08:28 PM	#7 (permalink)
Richieboy67 Account Closed Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: East Coast USA Posts: 840 0.93 NP$ (Donate)	I have made a few changes.... I would love to hear how I did... Thanks.. http://www.anonlinemall.com/

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