Review needed

sunmirror · 01-28-2004, 01:27 AM

Please let me know what you think of this:
http://s.sorin.home.ro/html

Any oppinion welcome

adam_uk · 01-28-2004, 01:28 AM

looks nice, fresh clean,

maybe get some images in there

like to see the finished article

sunmirror · 01-28-2004, 05:05 AM

Adam, thanks for your thoughts. The look is definitely being improved, and I'll post the link when all is done.

Could anyone else give some more oppinions about this. It's my first design, so please let me know what you think, I'd really appreciate some constructive criticism.

Jeanco · 01-28-2004, 06:56 AM

It looks very amateurish to me. As if it was thrown together in about 15 minutes.

I'd take it down and start over.

Edit: Just read it was your first design, and in that sense its a decent start. I suggest keep trying new things and don't develop the first couple as you keep going in design you'll get better and better. I did about 7 designs before I actually developed my first site.

identity_00 · 01-28-2004, 09:58 AM

clean little site. really slow right now because its just images right now.. just make sure you add "text" not "image text" in the future after you code and reduce the image sizes.

good luck

sunmirror · 01-28-2004, 11:03 AM

Well, this is how it looks now:
http://s.sorin.home.ro/html2

I guess it's much better right now (looking at what I had a few hours earlier it seems a mess).

I'll probably start coding the html soon, so please give me some more feedback on the looks.

Anthony · 02-06-2004, 02:18 PM

Good start. Work on the logo some more.

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sunmirror New Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 8	Review needed Please let me know what you think of this: http://s.sorin.home.ro/html Any oppinion welcome

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Jeanco RyanPrice.ca - Developer Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 1,328	It looks very amateurish to me. As if it was thrown together in about 15 minutes. I'd take it down and start over. Edit: Just read it was your first design, and in that sense its a decent start. I suggest keep trying new things and don't develop the first couple as you keep going in design you'll get better and better. I did about 7 designs before I actually developed my first site. __________________ Ryan Price - Webmaster www.HostDurham.com - For Hosting \| www.jeanco.ca - For Webdesign

01-28-2004, 01:28 AM	#2 (permalink)
adam_uk Senior Member Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 2,187	looks nice, fresh clean, maybe get some images in there like to see the finished article

01-28-2004, 05:05 AM	THREAD STARTER #3 (permalink)
sunmirror New Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 8	Adam, thanks for your thoughts. The look is definitely being improved, and I'll post the link when all is done. Could anyone else give some more oppinions about this. It's my first design, so please let me know what you think, I'd really appreciate some constructive criticism.

01-28-2004, 09:58 AM	#5 (permalink)
identity_00 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Tacoma, WA Posts: 1,212	clean little site. really slow right now because its just images right now.. just make sure you add "text" not "image text" in the future after you code and reduce the image sizes. good luck

01-28-2004, 11:03 AM	THREAD STARTER #6 (permalink)
sunmirror New Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 8	Well, this is how it looks now: http://s.sorin.home.ro/html2 I guess it's much better right now (looking at what I had a few hours earlier it seems a mess). I'll probably start coding the html soon, so please give me some more feedback on the looks.

02-06-2004, 02:18 PM	#7 (permalink)
Anthony NamePros Expert Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: NYC Posts: 9,132	Good start. Work on the logo some more.

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