What do you all think?

elecktricity · 03-15-2006, 08:13 PM

I just got done with one of my sites, was wondering on what you all though of it.
Elecktricity.com

-Elecktricity

Sains · 03-15-2006, 08:28 PM

Hello

I think the site is nice, though I would tend to think the news posts don't stand out enough against that rather 'busy' background. I'd suggest either making the font bigger or using a plain-colour background as reading the text is a little bit difficult.

Otherwise it's nice

Very shiny!

HTH

peter phillips · 03-16-2006, 06:02 AM

I agree, the font doesn't match the stylish background. Use another font and font color or make these changes in the existing font.

elecktricity · 03-16-2006, 06:51 AM

so just the text background and text font and colors, okay seems easy enough

D@Z · 03-16-2006, 07:48 AM

I really like it, but the news just seems real boring. The text is small and the news headlines don't grab your attention. Try using some images regarding the news and try setting the news out in different ways rather than the same boring

Headline
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News
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Comments

Other than that, you've got a good design on your hands there.

LeetPCUser · 03-16-2006, 08:28 AM

Looks good.

Suggestions: Make the font size a bit bigger and include more pictures. This is a portfolio not a blog.

kpm547 · 03-16-2006, 08:59 AM

I have to agree. The design is very nice. There does seem to be a bit of a blur to areas of the design, which bug me, but may be what you were looking for. The text is too small and definitely not enough images. I didn't read anything because it didn't peak my interest at all.

The portfolio was boring. I was hoping for some pictures or something, but all I got was what looked like the first post on the main page.

The page looks like a blog, but unfortunately, I don't know what its about. I don't know what you do or what the page is for. I'm not going to read any of it if I don't know what the page is about. I think you need to add somewhere a description of what the purpose of the page is.

Lots of potential. Keep working.

Shorty · 03-16-2006, 09:29 AM

The graphics are mindblowing, well done on that entire layout. Only criticism I would give is: I dont think the left border to the news things fit well. Other than that it's very aesthetically pleasing.

elecktricity · 03-17-2006, 09:46 AM

allright ill try and setup the posts a bit better and change the font up a bit
but it is a portfolio/blog type of site

dojo · 03-18-2006, 01:38 PM

It's a nice layout indeed. Elegant and well thought ..

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Sains NamePros Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Barnstaple Posts: 117 24.10 NP$ (Donate)	Hello I think the site is nice, though I would tend to think the news posts don't stand out enough against that rather 'busy' background. I'd suggest either making the font bigger or using a plain-colour background as reading the text is a little bit difficult. Otherwise it's nice Very shiny! HTH __________________ Final Fantasy

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kpm547 NamePros Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 171 256.00 NP$ (Donate)	I have to agree. The design is very nice. There does seem to be a bit of a blur to areas of the design, which bug me, but may be what you were looking for. The text is too small and definitely not enough images. I didn't read anything because it didn't peak my interest at all. The portfolio was boring. I was hoping for some pictures or something, but all I got was what looked like the first post on the main page. The page looks like a blog, but unfortunately, I don't know what its about. I don't know what you do or what the page is for. I'm not going to read any of it if I don't know what the page is about. I think you need to add somewhere a description of what the purpose of the page is. Lots of potential. Keep working. __________________ www.twocrazyducks.com - Two Crazy Ducks Web Hosting - Lethbridge, Alberta www.lasara.org - Lethbridge Area Search and Rescue themuellers.ca - The Mueller Family Webpage jobsitestructures.com - Job Site Structures Ltd. - for all your site office and accomodation needs!

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dojo NamePros Regular Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 295 59.00 NP$ (Donate)	It's a nice layout indeed. Elegant and well thought .. __________________ Webmaster Tips and Tricks - Unique content, web development topics Webmaster Blog - 1 unique article each day Links for Web Design - submit your webmaster site for free in a human edited, SEO friendly directory

03-16-2006, 06:51 AM	#4 (permalink)
elecktricity NamePros Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Trapped in my own little world. Posts: 47 0.00 NP$ (Donate)	so just the text background and text font and colors, okay seems easy enough

03-16-2006, 07:48 AM	#5 (permalink)
D@Z NamePros Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 165 94.00 NP$ (Donate)	I really like it, but the news just seems real boring. The text is small and the news headlines don't grab your attention. Try using some images regarding the news and try setting the news out in different ways rather than the same boring Headline ------------------------------ News ------------------------------ Comments Other than that, you've got a good design on your hands there.

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LeetPCUser Account Suspended Join Date: May 2005 Location: Whitewater, WI Posts: 3,714 17.55 NP$ (Donate)	Looks good. Suggestions: Make the font size a bit bigger and include more pictures. This is a portfolio not a blog.

03-16-2006, 09:29 AM	#8 (permalink)
Shorty Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: England Posts: 1,035 102.05 NP$ (Donate)	The graphics are mindblowing, well done on that entire layout. Only criticism I would give is: I dont think the left border to the news things fit well. Other than that it's very aesthetically pleasing.

03-17-2006, 09:46 AM	#9 (permalink)
elecktricity NamePros Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Trapped in my own little world. Posts: 47 0.00 NP$ (Donate)	allright ill try and setup the posts a bit better and change the font up a bit but it is a portfolio/blog type of site

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