Twig.biz - New Site. New Design.

Jim_ · 03-11-2006, 09:48 PM

I registered the domain and couldn't think of anything else to put on it...so I ended up with an entertainment portal.

http://www.twig.biz

Anyway, I went for a simple, clean look. I made it as dependant on CSS as I could.
It was valid xhtml transitional... until I added content.

Anyway, I'm looking for feedback on the design.

(If you're going to complain about the empty space in the upper right, I'll be putting an extra menu there or maybe some advertisements soon.)

2Cunning · 03-12-2006, 02:36 PM

I think it starts to go a bit wrong with the thick orange bars stretching across the screen, perhaps have it stop half way and have a content box on the right hand side with more of a description, or make them more square shape rather then rectangle and have more on the screen. The design just doesnt quite seem to gel with me, play around and see if you can get it any better, its coming there

Good luck

2C

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Jim_ NamePros Regular Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 585 285.40 NP$ (Donate)	Twig.biz - New Site. New Design. I registered the domain and couldn't think of anything else to put on it...so I ended up with an entertainment portal. http://www.twig.biz Anyway, I went for a simple, clean look. I made it as dependant on CSS as I could. It was valid xhtml transitional... until I added content. Anyway, I'm looking for feedback on the design. (If you're going to complain about the empty space in the upper right, I'll be putting an extra menu there or maybe some advertisements soon.) __________________ ask me about the internet Last edited by Jim_; 03-11-2006 at 09:51 PM.

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2Cunning NamePros Regular Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 305 200.80 NP$ (Donate)	I think it starts to go a bit wrong with the thick orange bars stretching across the screen, perhaps have it stop half way and have a content box on the right hand side with more of a description, or make them more square shape rather then rectangle and have more on the screen. The design just doesnt quite seem to gel with me, play around and see if you can get it any better, its coming there Good luck 2C __________________ :hi: Hlix.com .:. FootballThoughts.co.uk .:. MKDonsfc.co.uk .:. AdoptAPenguin.co.uk LLLL.Com's: EERZ.com \| HLIX.com \| CYFQ.com \| PRZU.com \| MGYZ.com LLLLL.Com's: Azlam.com \| Gawde.com \| Yasif.com \| Birrd.com \| Slaun.com

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