First Valid Layout

buddybuddha · 01-19-2006, 03:39 PM

I finally wrote the code for my new website.

It will essentially be competition to sites like Purevolume and Bandspace, with a lot more focus on bands locally that you can find in your own town.

Please take a look at this layout and critique for:
Color Choice
Overall Style
Content
Form Judgment
Tangibility of Cencept
Anything Else

http://www.bluntbeat.com/dynIndex.html

Rowan W · 01-19-2006, 04:10 PM

Originally Posted by HTML Validator

In XHTML, enumerated attribute values are case sensitive and must be lowercase. Instead of "Submit", use "submit". This is in contrast to HTML, where values are normally case-insensitive.

Looks pretty good to me, nicely done.

buddybuddha · 01-19-2006, 04:13 PM

Was that the only validation error? I used dreamweaver and it gave me no errors, but Ill fix that.

PoorDoggie · 01-20-2006, 06:27 AM

Looks great, only problem I have is that it is a little too dark.

Great site though!

JuggernautH · 01-20-2006, 06:48 AM

Looks awesome, but brigher colors or text would be nice though.

dweeb · 01-20-2006, 08:10 AM

It looks really nice and organised. Interesting stuff you got there.

All the best with your site!

buddybuddha · 01-20-2006, 10:35 AM

You say it is too dark, but I was going for the grungy dark look. My plan is that after I launch this site, I will launch other sites with different names and layouts, but essentially do the same thing and have the same database, etc. They will all be under one network, so that I control many sites instead of just one. I dont know if that's a good idea. At first it seemed a little deceptive and unethical, but I will publicly note that they are the same.
Anyways, about the darkness, is the text hard to read?
And on a sidenote:
Do you think the different boxes in the Find Music div look alright?

JuggernautH · 01-20-2006, 10:41 AM

Everything is 100% nice now i think, awesome

voodoo · 01-20-2006, 05:44 PM

Nice layout it all fits together nicely good job

labrocca · 01-21-2006, 12:29 AM

Excellent layout.

Amnezia · 01-21-2006, 02:07 AM

Very nice design, dont change it, colours look great to me

PoorDoggie · 01-22-2006, 04:04 PM

Originally Posted by buddybuddha

You say it is too dark, but I was going for the grungy dark look.

Granted, but it makes the text too bright, and it looks a little odd. Not a big problem though.
????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/159315-first-valid-layout.html

Quote:

My plan is that after I launch this site, I will launch other sites with different names and layouts, but essentially do the same thing and have the same database, etc. They will all be under one network, so that I control many sites instead of just one. I dont know if that's a good idea. At first it seemed a little deceptive and unethical, but I will publicly note that they are the same.

Not deceptive and unethical. I am not aware of any legal problems with it either. If you want, just put "Part of the ... network" at the bottom, under the copyright info.

weblord · 01-23-2006, 02:56 AM

Color Choice - best suite those type of sites.
Overall Style - great style most probably a template i could be wrong.
Content - overall great but the links are not functional yet
Form Judgment - one word: "band" comes to mind when viewing it.
Tangibility of Cencept - that i can't tell im no music or band lover.
Anything Else - overall ok

01-19-2006, 03:39 PM	THREAD STARTER #1 (permalink)
buddybuddha NamePros Regular Join Date: May 2005 Location: PA Posts: 216	First Valid Layout I finally wrote the code for my new website. It will essentially be competition to sites like Purevolume and Bandspace, with a lot more focus on bands locally that you can find in your own town. Please take a look at this layout and critique for: Color Choice Overall Style Content Form Judgment Tangibility of Cencept Anything Else http://www.bluntbeat.com/dynIndex.html __________________ The Kevin Dolan Design By Dolan Genetic Programming Source EuroToDollar: Forex Basics

01-19-2006, 04:13 PM	THREAD STARTER #3 (permalink)
buddybuddha NamePros Regular Join Date: May 2005 Location: PA Posts: 216	Was that the only validation error? I used dreamweaver and it gave me no errors, but Ill fix that. __________________ The Kevin Dolan Design By Dolan Genetic Programming Source EuroToDollar: Forex Basics

01-20-2006, 10:35 AM	THREAD STARTER #7 (permalink)
buddybuddha NamePros Regular Join Date: May 2005 Location: PA Posts: 216	You say it is too dark, but I was going for the grungy dark look. My plan is that after I launch this site, I will launch other sites with different names and layouts, but essentially do the same thing and have the same database, etc. They will all be under one network, so that I control many sites instead of just one. I dont know if that's a good idea. At first it seemed a little deceptive and unethical, but I will publicly note that they are the same. Anyways, about the darkness, is the text hard to read? And on a sidenote: Do you think the different boxes in the Find Music div look alright? __________________ The Kevin Dolan Design By Dolan Genetic Programming Source EuroToDollar: Forex Basics

01-21-2006, 12:29 AM	#10 (permalink)
labrocca NamePros Expert Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 6,277 Follow @supportforums	Excellent layout. __________________ :$: Support Forum <-- My latest endeavor.:loveyou: Debate Forums Free Online Sudoku My vBum Blog

01-21-2006, 02:07 AM	#11 (permalink)
Amnezia Professional Monkey Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Escaped from the zoo Posts: 907	Very nice design, dont change it, colours look great to me __________________ Webmaster Words

01-20-2006, 06:27 AM	#4 (permalink)
PoorDoggie Soon to be RICHdoggie! Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: UK Posts: 2,408	Looks great, only problem I have is that it is a little too dark. Great site though!

01-20-2006, 06:48 AM	#5 (permalink)
JuggernautH Account Closed Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ../home/mysite Posts: 3,566	Looks awesome, but brigher colors or text would be nice though.

01-20-2006, 08:10 AM	#6 (permalink)
dweeb NamePros Regular Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 405	It looks really nice and organised. Interesting stuff you got there. All the best with your site!

01-20-2006, 10:41 AM	#8 (permalink)
JuggernautH Account Closed Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ../home/mysite Posts: 3,566	Everything is 100% nice now i think, awesome

01-20-2006, 05:44 PM	#9 (permalink)
voodoo NamePros Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 161	Nice layout it all fits together nicely good job

01-23-2006, 02:56 AM	#13 (permalink)
weblord NamePros Legend Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Philippines - www.Nabaza.com Posts: 19,785	Color Choice - best suite those type of sites. Overall Style - great style most probably a template i could be wrong. Content - overall great but the links are not functional yet Form Judgment - one word: "band" comes to mind when viewing it. Tangibility of Cencept - that i can't tell im no music or band lover. Anything Else - overall ok __________________ Nabaza.com - Amaia

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