Working on this one, how is it ?

bizing · 01-15-2006, 04:25 AM

I am working on that one, and I have finished the layout.
It will have a google under the left part.

What do you guys think ?

http://www.egyptiancookbook.info/

Thanks for inputs.

lowco2525 · 01-15-2006, 06:50 AM

Haha, looks really nice. Good luck, it's really unique!

bizing · 01-15-2006, 11:43 AM

Thanks for the opinion .. but I still don't understand the "Haha"

Anyone else ?

capnkirk · 01-15-2006, 11:51 AM

It does look good. I think the "haha" was there to stress how very unique it is.

lowco2525 · 01-15-2006, 12:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by capnkirk

It does look good. I think the "haha" was there to stress how very unique it is.

Yeah like haha- it's unique and cute.

bizing · 01-16-2006, 03:52 AM

Thanks guys

LeetPCUser · 01-17-2006, 06:59 AM

Positive: The background blue is a nice shade. It is easy on the eyes and very warming. I also like the double column text for the site. The Egyptian Cookbook logo is very nice and the red and blue go quite well.

Negative: That green image at the top should change. I think the read and blue was looking very good. The green just takes away from it. I can't even read the site because my eyes keep getting pulled towards that. I also think the navbar should be under the logo and span across the page. Otherwise it is too hard to keep going all the way to the top of the page to click links. The little dotted box around the copyright should go too. The dotted box on the left content should go to. Maybe just make a dotted line in between the two panes so the user can distinguish the difference?

Attractiveness: 5/10
Content: 3/10 (links go to subdirectory)
Overall: 4/10

capnkirk · 01-18-2006, 12:52 PM

I noticed something easily fixed. One of your links isn't complete before it breaks to the next line ("other Egyption foods"). All you need are non-breaking spaces where your regular spaces are.

The code to do it is " " (leave out the quotes).

bizing · 01-18-2006, 01:56 PM

TheComputerGeek247 the best review I could get.

Thanks very much. I will think of that too ...

LeetPCUser · 01-19-2006, 06:36 AM

Sorry to be so harsh. I am just a harsh critique because then you know all the nitpicky things.

01-15-2006, 04:25 AM	#1 (permalink)
bizing NamePros Regular Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Romania Posts: 287 98.25 NP$ (Donate)	Working on this one, how is it ? I am working on that one, and I have finished the layout. It will have a google under the left part. What do you guys think ? http://www.egyptiancookbook.info/ Thanks for inputs.

01-15-2006, 06:50 AM	#2 (permalink)
lowco2525 NamePros Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 150 479.40 NP$ (Donate)	Haha, looks really nice. Good luck, it's really unique! __________________ Make $$ Easy

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01-15-2006, 11:43 AM	#3 (permalink)
bizing NamePros Regular Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Romania Posts: 287 98.25 NP$ (Donate)	Thanks for the opinion .. but I still don't understand the "Haha" Anyone else ?

01-15-2006, 11:51 AM	#4 (permalink)
capnkirk New Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 7 4.00 NP$ (Donate)	It does look good. I think the "haha" was there to stress how very unique it is.

01-16-2006, 03:52 AM	#6 (permalink)
bizing NamePros Regular Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Romania Posts: 287 98.25 NP$ (Donate)	Thanks guys

01-17-2006, 06:59 AM	#7 (permalink)
LeetPCUser Account Suspended Join Date: May 2005 Location: Whitewater, WI Posts: 3,714 17.55 NP$ (Donate)	Positive: The background blue is a nice shade. It is easy on the eyes and very warming. I also like the double column text for the site. The Egyptian Cookbook logo is very nice and the red and blue go quite well. Negative: That green image at the top should change. I think the read and blue was looking very good. The green just takes away from it. I can't even read the site because my eyes keep getting pulled towards that. I also think the navbar should be under the logo and span across the page. Otherwise it is too hard to keep going all the way to the top of the page to click links. The little dotted box around the copyright should go too. The dotted box on the left content should go to. Maybe just make a dotted line in between the two panes so the user can distinguish the difference? Attractiveness: 5/10 Content: 3/10 (links go to subdirectory) Overall: 4/10

01-18-2006, 12:52 PM	#8 (permalink)
capnkirk New Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 7 4.00 NP$ (Donate)	I noticed something easily fixed. One of your links isn't complete before it breaks to the next line ("other Egyption foods"). All you need are non-breaking spaces where your regular spaces are. The code to do it is " " (leave out the quotes).

01-18-2006, 01:56 PM	#9 (permalink)
bizing NamePros Regular Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Romania Posts: 287 98.25 NP$ (Donate)	TheComputerGeek247 the best review I could get. Thanks very much. I will think of that too ...

01-19-2006, 06:36 AM	#10 (permalink)
LeetPCUser Account Suspended Join Date: May 2005 Location: Whitewater, WI Posts: 3,714 17.55 NP$ (Donate)	Sorry to be so harsh. I am just a harsh critique because then you know all the nitpicky things.

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