Please review my new site!!

Splinter Freelance · 01-13-2006, 09:08 PM

Well, I finally launched SplinterFreelance Version 2.0

Let me know what you think of the layout. I know the nav text may be some what small, but I made several different ways to navigate the site.

Please post any spelling errors, layout errors, etc...

Splinter Freelance Version 2.0

Here is the way the site used to look:

Version 1.0

Thanks for your comments,

Sam

Splinter Freelance · 01-13-2006, 11:52 PM

any one?

vasam · 01-14-2006, 06:38 AM

Your site looks good. But I do not understand why do you use picture of nature on the top... seems doesn't fit webdesign/development idea.

Splinter Freelance · 01-14-2006, 09:26 AM

Well, I am based in Evergreen Colorado... A mountain town and many of my clients are business owners within the town of evergreen and surrounding mountain areas

firestorm · 01-14-2006, 09:32 AM

Great improvement on the second design. I like it. It seems like you phone # at the top is cut off a lil' bit and I would add that it is a phone # as well(if it is lol). Nice site.

-fire

obenix · 01-14-2006, 09:35 AM

Color scheme is a little dull. Spruce up your page with livelier colors.
Plonk some portfolios on your homepage to demonstrate your capabilities.

Splinter Freelance · 01-14-2006, 10:09 AM

Thanks for the reviews guys... keep em coming

LeetPCUser · 01-14-2006, 08:31 PM

Positive: The new site is a million times better than the old one. I love this new design. Great use of colors and design. The design, colors, and logo seem to be flawless.

Negative: The phone number in the design at the top is hard to read. Try to change the text on it. Also the text in the box that asks for input is hard to read. I would also recommend changing the rollover color of links. It makes it a bit hard to read.

Attractiveness: 9/10
Content: 8/10
Overall: 9/10

Hope This Helps,

Splinter Freelance · 01-14-2006, 08:33 PM

Thanks Bryan

Splinter Freelance · 01-16-2006, 03:33 PM

I redid the code and now most of the pages validate. I also added a very faint bg and made the content area white. If you guys notice any more errors, let me know.

I wanted to do the site w/o tables, but I decided nothing structures content like tables.

Let me know what you think...

http://splinterfreelance.com

ecampsite.co.uk · 01-16-2006, 06:18 PM

Message Sent. You should here back from us in 24 to 48 hours

on the quote page.... For 1. you should have some kinda validation even if its just Javascript.
2. here should be 'hear'

Sorry about the empty message i sent!

Splinter Freelance · 01-16-2006, 07:10 PM

Well, I am working on a quote system, which will for sure have some form of validation.

And I will change here to hear

BTW I got your message, I will reply.. please post whether or not you receive it.

01-13-2006, 09:08 PM	THREAD STARTER #1 (permalink)
Splinter Freelance NamePros Regular Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Evergreen, CO USA Posts: 252	Please review my new site!! Well, I finally launched SplinterFreelance Version 2.0 Let me know what you think of the layout. I know the nav text may be some what small, but I made several different ways to navigate the site. Please post any spelling errors, layout errors, etc... Splinter Freelance Version 2.0 Here is the way the site used to look: Version 1.0 Thanks for your comments, Sam __________________ ++ Splinter Freelance Designs ++ {NEW LAYOUT} How To Start a Small Business ;) The Forums Satellite Radio Receivers \| AIMForum.com \| Net Marketing \| Google Talk Forum \| FREE STUFF!

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01-14-2006, 06:38 AM	#3 (permalink)
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01-14-2006, 09:26 AM	THREAD STARTER #4 (permalink)
Splinter Freelance NamePros Regular Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Evergreen, CO USA Posts: 252	Well, I am based in Evergreen Colorado... A mountain town and many of my clients are business owners within the town of evergreen and surrounding mountain areas __________________ ++ Splinter Freelance Designs ++ {NEW LAYOUT} How To Start a Small Business ;) The Forums Satellite Radio Receivers \| AIMForum.com \| Net Marketing \| Google Talk Forum \| FREE STUFF!

01-14-2006, 09:35 AM	#6 (permalink)
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01-14-2006, 09:32 AM	#5 (permalink)
firestorm NamePros Regular Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NC Posts: 205	Great improvement on the second design. I like it. It seems like you phone # at the top is cut off a lil' bit and I would add that it is a phone # as well(if it is lol). Nice site. -fire

01-14-2006, 10:09 AM	THREAD STARTER #7 (permalink)
Splinter Freelance NamePros Regular Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Evergreen, CO USA Posts: 252	Thanks for the reviews guys... keep em coming __________________ ++ Splinter Freelance Designs ++ {NEW LAYOUT} How To Start a Small Business ;) The Forums Satellite Radio Receivers \| AIMForum.com \| Net Marketing \| Google Talk Forum \| FREE STUFF!

01-14-2006, 08:31 PM	#8 (permalink)
LeetPCUser Account Suspended Join Date: May 2005 Location: Whitewater, WI Posts: 3,710	Positive: The new site is a million times better than the old one. I love this new design. Great use of colors and design. The design, colors, and logo seem to be flawless. Negative: The phone number in the design at the top is hard to read. Try to change the text on it. Also the text in the box that asks for input is hard to read. I would also recommend changing the rollover color of links. It makes it a bit hard to read. Attractiveness: 9/10 Content: 8/10 Overall: 9/10 Hope This Helps,

01-14-2006, 08:33 PM	THREAD STARTER #9 (permalink)
Splinter Freelance NamePros Regular Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Evergreen, CO USA Posts: 252	Thanks Bryan __________________ ++ Splinter Freelance Designs ++ {NEW LAYOUT} How To Start a Small Business ;) The Forums Satellite Radio Receivers \| AIMForum.com \| Net Marketing \| Google Talk Forum \| FREE STUFF!

01-16-2006, 03:33 PM	THREAD STARTER #10 (permalink)
Splinter Freelance NamePros Regular Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Evergreen, CO USA Posts: 252	I redid the code and now most of the pages validate. I also added a very faint bg and made the content area white. If you guys notice any more errors, let me know. I wanted to do the site w/o tables, but I decided nothing structures content like tables. Let me know what you think... http://splinterfreelance.com __________________ ++ Splinter Freelance Designs ++ {NEW LAYOUT} How To Start a Small Business ;) The Forums Satellite Radio Receivers \| AIMForum.com \| Net Marketing \| Google Talk Forum \| FREE STUFF!

01-16-2006, 06:18 PM	#11 (permalink)
ecampsite.co.uk NamePros Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 63	Message Sent. You should here back from us in 24 to 48 hours on the quote page.... For 1. you should have some kinda validation even if its just Javascript. 2. here should be 'hear' Sorry about the empty message i sent!

01-16-2006, 07:10 PM	THREAD STARTER #12 (permalink)
Splinter Freelance NamePros Regular Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Evergreen, CO USA Posts: 252	Well, I am working on a quote system, which will for sure have some form of validation. And I will change here to hear BTW I got your message, I will reply.. please post whether or not you receive it. __________________ ++ Splinter Freelance Designs ++ {NEW LAYOUT} How To Start a Small Business ;) The Forums Satellite Radio Receivers \| AIMForum.com \| Net Marketing \| Google Talk Forum \| FREE STUFF!

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