I think it's okay for the most part. I didn't like the colors.

Honestly I think if you changed the colors to a much much lighter color that would make that website 100% better and keep visitors there alot longer. The artwork looks good though.

I didn't like the music, but that was nice of you to include an option to turn it off.
You portfolio is decent.

Keep working on it. And well you may want to consider designing for different resolutions especially 800X600 if you want to compete with the big boys.
For the type of website you've got there I think it's pretty good. But if you wanted to use it to convince customers to visit and possibly buy your design services I don't think it's put together very well.
Anyways no offense meant by any of what I said that's just from my point of view.
