Please review my site

falcon12 · 11-18-2005, 09:06 AM

Please review this one
http://websitedevelop.net
only start page

infinitomagazine · 11-18-2005, 09:16 AM

well i think ur first page is fine, good colour combination, rights fonts, of course very god domain

i guees is a little empty site, maybe more content or image would be better.

keep working.

LeetPCUser · 11-22-2005, 09:03 AM

In firefox some of the text goes outside the boxes. This is the only thing I really noticed that was off about the site.

Splinter Freelance · 11-22-2005, 09:18 AM

I like the idea and the layout, but something seems off about the design. The colors are good and the content boxes are good, but they dont seem to work together. Maybe if the spider web were on a solid bg... I cant quite place whats missing.

BTW in Mozilla, the text isnt staying in the boxes.

-MGS- · 11-22-2005, 09:36 AM

I liek the main page very good! Like how you have laid it out and added the infomation only a few loading time problems tho try to speed things up! Buy good sitE

Ber|Art · 11-22-2005, 09:55 AM

First thing I missed a litle, where the mouse overs on the links

Furthermore I do not understand the white lines above the menu's they are inconsistant?

Rive · 11-22-2005, 01:45 PM

Nice layout... Just a suggestion, I noticed that some of the text are not in the boxes and there's a lot of empty spaces. It needs more content and images... I think you still need to work on this site. Goodluck!

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srijit · 11-23-2005, 01:46 AM

very nice design, but why is there a white bar on the top of each box? also some text is outside box. i used Firefox to check site btw.
other than that, very nice

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Splinter Freelance NamePros Regular Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Evergreen, CO USA Posts: 252	I like the idea and the layout, but something seems off about the design. The colors are good and the content boxes are good, but they dont seem to work together. Maybe if the spider web were on a solid bg... I cant quite place whats missing. BTW in Mozilla, the text isnt staying in the boxes. __________________ ++ Splinter Freelance Designs ++ {NEW LAYOUT} How To Start a Small Business ;) The Forums Satellite Radio Receivers \| AIMForum.com \| Net Marketing \| Google Talk Forum \| FREE STUFF!

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-MGS- Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Manchester Posts: 1,000 Follow @CrazyFruitHead	I liek the main page very good! Like how you have laid it out and added the infomation only a few loading time problems tho try to speed things up! Buy good sitE __________________ Have a Break On The Web - BreakOnTheWeb.Com Ultimate Free Gaming. Ninja Madness - Free Ninja Gaming - TechBer The Technology Blog ActionMadness.Com Online Gaming for you

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Ber\|Art Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: the Netherlands Posts: 1,519	First thing I missed a litle, where the mouse overs on the links Furthermore I do not understand the white lines above the menu's they are inconsistant? __________________ Berrie Pelser Ber\|Art Visual Design (http://hosting.ber-art.nl) DNOA Member LinkedIN Profile

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LeetPCUser Account Suspended Join Date: May 2005 Location: Whitewater, WI Posts: 3,710	In firefox some of the text goes outside the boxes. This is the only thing I really noticed that was off about the site.

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Rive NamePros Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 55	Nice layout... Just a suggestion, I noticed that some of the text are not in the boxes and there's a lot of empty spaces. It needs more content and images... I think you still need to work on this site. Goodluck! ____________________________________ Catalog Printing "The reward of a thing well done, is to have done it."

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