review my newest work project

phlblouch · 08-26-2005, 07:29 AM

take a look at this and tell me what you think, it is my latest project at work, i just wanted some feedback.

www.pharmacyvillage.com

SB_GEMINI · 08-26-2005, 07:43 AM

i think its looking great, though get rid of the drop shadows on some of the words ie "Members Login" you want to stick to a crisp design. Change the times new roman font to something like Arial, also dont make the content text in the middle bold looks horible, otherwise it looks really good, Well Done!

GJ · 08-26-2005, 07:45 AM

Abit dull, make sure you change the logo colours so they stand out, lighter colours.

phlblouch · 08-26-2005, 07:52 AM

thanks for both of the responses, i agree with the drop shadows and i am going to change that for sure... as far as the logo, man i wish i could change it, unfortunatly i did not design them but i have to stick with them...

any more input?

thanks

ammo · 08-26-2005, 11:32 AM

I love it looking very sweet, i like the large image at the top, id maybe change that text tho

phlblouch · 08-26-2005, 01:32 PM

just curious what you would change about the text ammo

Fowl · 08-26-2005, 07:42 PM

Execlent site, but make the banner a little smaller and change the colour of the text "members login" "not a member?" (make it brighter)

def1 · 08-26-2005, 09:09 PM

it looks very good and the layout of the text and images flow very smoothly

occipocci · 08-27-2005, 04:36 AM

Nice work I liek the page layout. Few opinions:
- header is too large, takes up way too much of the screen nice pic though
- too many fonts - thje serifs on the menu are a killer. Choose two, I suggest the sans serif you ar using and then the font used int he logo for any other bits.
- too many colours. monotoned sites are all the rage no. Maybe consider using just the blue (in different tones) and grey? the yellow is a bit yuck for me
- the bolded text is too much. You cant bold everything - it takes away from the point of bolded text to begin with.

Cobalt · 08-27-2005, 04:46 AM

Your overall design is laid out perfect. I like the concept, the one thing that just ruins your site design is the text. All of the text in my eyes just doesn't seem to flow. The navigation text is the right color, but the style is horrid in my eyes. It seems throughout the site, the text is all the same style, but just different colors, the color of the yext is good, and matches the layout, but you need to find a smooth, crisp text style. The current is just to "Bulky"to really fit in. I would also suggest you put some spacing, "just a little" inbetween your content areas. It seems to be getting to "crammed" together.

Overall, your site is well done & I wish you the best of luck!

Zubair1 · 08-27-2005, 06:34 AM

nice I like I would give this site a 7 on a scale of 1 to 10. nice job

rustypaulin · 08-27-2005, 11:28 AM

i think it looks really good, i especially like the header it looks excellent

phlblouch · 08-29-2005, 06:53 AM

thanks to all of the responses, i really appreciate all of the feedback. i am definetly considering getting rid of all of the bold text, per all of the responses about it. and a few other changes possibly. there is a long way to go on this site.

thanks again

Damo-Online · 09-01-2005, 12:09 AM

Interesting banner, just make it smaller and the site is perfect.

08-26-2005, 07:29 AM	#1 (permalink)
phlblouch New Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 23 20.00 NP$ (Donate)	review my newest work project take a look at this and tell me what you think, it is my latest project at work, i just wanted some feedback. www.pharmacyvillage.com __________________ Thanks, Philip www.okc-hornets.com - For Sale!!! Big Money Maker www.webtechok.com - Hundreds of web design solutions all in one site www.okcwholesale.com - Wholesale products, coming soon

08-26-2005, 07:43 AM	#2 (permalink)
SB_GEMINI NamePros Regular Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Newport, UK Posts: 925 119.25 NP$ (Donate)	i think its looking great, though get rid of the drop shadows on some of the words ie "Members Login" you want to stick to a crisp design. Change the times new roman font to something like Arial, also dont make the content text in the middle bold looks horible, otherwise it looks really good, Well Done! __________________ SB \| Networks eCards4ALL.co.uk \| RobertDeNiroOnline.com \| Simon Barclay - Web/Graphic Designer \| GreatDesigners.Net \| JokeCabin.com \| FawltyTowersOnline.com

08-26-2005, 07:52 AM	#4 (permalink)
phlblouch New Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 23 20.00 NP$ (Donate)	thanks for both of the responses, i agree with the drop shadows and i am going to change that for sure... as far as the logo, man i wish i could change it, unfortunatly i did not design them but i have to stick with them... any more input? thanks __________________ Thanks, Philip www.okc-hornets.com - For Sale!!! Big Money Maker www.webtechok.com - Hundreds of web design solutions all in one site www.okcwholesale.com - Wholesale products, coming soon

08-26-2005, 01:32 PM	#6 (permalink)
phlblouch New Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 23 20.00 NP$ (Donate)	just curious what you would change about the text ammo __________________ Thanks, Philip www.okc-hornets.com - For Sale!!! Big Money Maker www.webtechok.com - Hundreds of web design solutions all in one site www.okcwholesale.com - Wholesale products, coming soon

08-27-2005, 06:34 AM	#11 (permalink)
Zubair1 NamePros Regular Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 874 159.45 NP$ (Donate)	nice I like I would give this site a 7 on a scale of 1 to 10. nice job __________________ Live Support : Zubair11 [at] hotmail.com Free SEO Directory! \|\| Free Games and Songs \|\| eBloggy.net Zubair.info \|\| Mixcat Interactive

08-26-2005, 07:45 AM	#3 (permalink)
GJ Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 2,256 986.40 NP$ (Donate)	Abit dull, make sure you change the logo colours so they stand out, lighter colours.

08-26-2005, 11:32 AM	#5 (permalink)
ammo Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Cornwall! Posts: 2,243 228.15 NP$ (Donate)	I love it looking very sweet, i like the large image at the top, id maybe change that text tho

08-26-2005, 07:42 PM	#7 (permalink)
Fowl NamePros Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Melboure , Australia Posts: 70 96.35 NP$ (Donate)	Execlent site, but make the banner a little smaller and change the colour of the text "members login" "not a member?" (make it brighter)

08-26-2005, 09:09 PM	#8 (permalink)
def1 Senior Member Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 1,537 293.00 NP$ (Donate)	it looks very good and the layout of the text and images flow very smoothly

08-27-2005, 04:36 AM	#9 (permalink)
occipocci New Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Australia Posts: 16 30.00 NP$ (Donate)	Nice work I liek the page layout. Few opinions: - header is too large, takes up way too much of the screen nice pic though - too many fonts - thje serifs on the menu are a killer. Choose two, I suggest the sans serif you ar using and then the font used int he logo for any other bits. - too many colours. monotoned sites are all the rage no. Maybe consider using just the blue (in different tones) and grey? the yellow is a bit yuck for me - the bolded text is too much. You cant bold everything - it takes away from the point of bolded text to begin with.

08-27-2005, 04:46 AM	#10 (permalink)
Cobalt Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: North Dakota Posts: 1,368 15.00 NP$ (Donate)	Your overall design is laid out perfect. I like the concept, the one thing that just ruins your site design is the text. All of the text in my eyes just doesn't seem to flow. The navigation text is the right color, but the style is horrid in my eyes. It seems throughout the site, the text is all the same style, but just different colors, the color of the yext is good, and matches the layout, but you need to find a smooth, crisp text style. The current is just to "Bulky"to really fit in. I would also suggest you put some spacing, "just a little" inbetween your content areas. It seems to be getting to "crammed" together. Overall, your site is well done & I wish you the best of luck!

08-27-2005, 11:28 AM	#12 (permalink)
rustypaulin NamePros Regular Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 344 56.65 NP$ (Donate)	i think it looks really good, i especially like the header it looks excellent __________________ Wii News

08-29-2005, 06:53 AM	#13 (permalink)
phlblouch New Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 23 20.00 NP$ (Donate)	thanks to all of the responses, i really appreciate all of the feedback. i am definetly considering getting rid of all of the bold text, per all of the responses about it. and a few other changes possibly. there is a long way to go on this site. thanks again __________________ Thanks, Philip www.okc-hornets.com - For Sale!!! Big Money Maker www.webtechok.com - Hundreds of web design solutions all in one site www.okcwholesale.com - Wholesale products, coming soon

09-01-2005, 12:09 AM	#14 (permalink)
Damo-Online NamePros Regular Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 334 0.80 NP$ (Donate)	Interesting banner, just make it smaller and the site is perfect. __________________ DAMAN KOVACS.info \|\|NZTV Presentation Site \|\| MEDIA-FORUMS \|\| GJ ONLINE \|\| JUST THAT HOST NZTV Pres Forum

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