so close... please review me!

jodaboda · 08-25-2005, 02:23 PM

I've only done a couple sites with CSS. Simpler is almost always better (at least, for the kinds of sites I do), but I still feel that this site is missing something or somehow "off". Just ignore the main page for now. I´m really just working on the content pages... so click on one of the numbers at the top.

y si hablas español, leelo. Es muy divertido. Se trata de la experiancia de vivir en una residencia en Buenos Aires. Escrito x mi novia alla.

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GeneCosta · 08-25-2005, 06:15 PM

Very simple and very effective.

Fowl · 08-25-2005, 10:01 PM

looks familer just can't rember where,

looks fantastic, wish I could do that

jodaboda · 08-26-2005, 12:09 AM

thanks. Um...My only inspiration has been csszengarden, so maybe one of those sites looks like mine. I hope not.

No ideas for improvement or for what the home page should be?

thanks again!

ammo · 08-26-2005, 11:50 AM

looks great, bit basic that bug creeps me out

jodaboda · 08-26-2005, 02:59 PM

yeah. It's the "basic" part I'm trying to get past. i've come up with a few ideas, but they all look sloppy and unprofessional. I think it just needs a simple texture, maybe some lines or a pattern.

no ideas?

SB_GEMINI · 08-26-2005, 03:20 PM

yeah its good clean quick load, doing good learning CSS i really wanna try to get to grips with it cos thats the future of web layouts, once you get the hang of it everything is much more acurate and easier

NuPagady · 08-26-2005, 03:23 PM

Looks nice.

But your site has some bugs...

Oh sorry, they are real bugs (not a defect in a system called "bug") lol

Good luck

def1 · 08-26-2005, 04:58 PM

i cant tell what it says but the structure is really good. I like it cause its simple

occipocci · 08-27-2005, 04:27 AM

I agree, itneeds some texture. maybe behind the header? Just a repeating bg int he css? Maybe it needs some naigatuion other than just home too. I can definitely see css zengarden there! Nice work.

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