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Old 08-25-2005, 03:14 AM   #1 (permalink)
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pFunny.com a Funny pics, Cartoons, Jokes, Games

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Hi, if you could remember, I have posted this site here for review (1~2 months ago). And most of your comment have been modified in my site.

Now, I had added many contents to it
- new pics page
- Cartoons
- Pets
- Submit pics
- Games
- Joke.

Now it almost complete the content (I may add video later.)

But I do not satisfied with the look still.
Anymore comment?

And the Games page and Joke pages is a differetn scritp so have different feel to the main page. Is that a problem?

Thanks in advance for you comment.

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Old 08-25-2005, 04:41 AM   #2 (permalink)
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The background seems to remind me of very dated wallpaper, also the logo even though its interesting dosnt seem to have a imedaiate connection to the theme "Funny".

Also get some spacing between the colums they look a litle sqaushed, i think the layout you got so far is working well.

Hope this helps
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Old 08-25-2005, 05:14 AM   #3 (permalink)
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That background is rubbish, the logo isn't very good and the colours are bland.
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Old 08-25-2005, 05:26 AM   #4 (permalink)
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It looks decent except for a couple things. First off, I like the layout. I would say you need a new logo, really bad. I can work something out for you if you want to PM me. Also I think your links are a little too, n00bish. Make them rollover or CSS styled and colored. The site seems a bit cramped too. Can you spread it out?
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It looks decent except for a couple things. First off, I like the layout. I would say you need a new logo, really bad. I can work something out for you if you want to PM me. Also I think your links are a little too, n00bish. Make them rollover or CSS styled and colored. The site seems a bit cramped too. Can you spread it out?
Thanks.

If I spread it out, then 800*600 screen will not fit in. My computer is 1024 wide, but someone had comment that it is too wide for them (so I guess they are using 800*600.)

For the link, I do not understand what you mean. which link are you referringn to?
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All the links are basic blue and purple links. Put some code in so they are like one color or something. The blue links are always a turn off. As for spread out I meant like multiple pages or less cluttered more spacing vertically. I am on AIM, MSN, and YIM now.

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That background is rubbish, the logo isn't very good and the colours are bland.
Thanks.

So, should I just remove the background pattern?
What colour do you recommend for the background? I think I may just replace the background by a colur code.....
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OMG HAHA man i love your site added it to my favorites!!! the pics are so cool!!! um i think you should fix the sides abit tho, like the link that says Xtreme Funny Pics, the "pics" was pushed to the next line. So it was kinda of hard to read. But overall i think it's wonderful!!!
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Old 08-25-2005, 03:28 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Only one comment, I used to align all my text/links centered as you have, but I find it looks more pro and easier to read when aligned left.
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first try removing the border from the logo, add more color to it, and remove the background image.
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OMG HAHA man i love your site added it to my favorites!!! the pics are so cool!!! um i think you should fix the sides abit tho, like the link that says Xtreme Funny Pics, the "pics" was pushed to the next line. So it was kinda of hard to read. But overall i think it's wonderful!!!

thanks. it is fixed. I shorten the link.

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Only one comment, I used to align all my text/links centered as you have, but I find it looks more pro and easier to read when aligned left.
Thanks, modified.
I had also reduce the font size of the FUN PAGE, so that most of the link text can fit in. It is a Feed so I cannot control the length of the text.

Now, it is smaller font than the one above it, would that be ulgy?

======================================== ALL =========

Background:
For all comment on the background........... I REMOVED it .........
Does it looks better? and do you think I should put a background color (which color code you recommend?)

Header:
I am seriously thinking to remove the "header" and replace it by a smaller "logo".
But no fund to get someone do the design yet !!!
So, need to wait..........

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first try removing the border from the logo, add more color to it, and remove the background image.
Thanks, but I don't how to do it............. I am a new comer........ trying to learn programming now......

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The background seems to remind me of very dated wallpaper, also the logo even though its interesting dosnt seem to have a imedaiate connection to the theme "Funny".

Also get some spacing between the colums they look a litle sqaushed, i think the layout you got so far is working well.

Hope this helps
Where is the spacing you are referring to?
thanks.

========= need some advice =========

I want to get rid of the space between the top of screen and the top of the HEADER.
Any advice on how to fix this bug?

Thanks

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You need a new banner (minus the blue outline), more ecxiting colour, new navbar with less items or more readability, less S T R E C H E D pictures, and a new seperator.

Overal not too much wrong with it
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You need a new banner (minus the blue outline), more ecxiting colour, new navbar with less items or more readability, less S T R E C H E D pictures, and a new seperator.

Overal not too much wrong with it
thanks.
I will redo the banner (change it to a smaller logo - like the NamePro size), redo the navbar with readability (but do not want to reduce items, actually, I am going to add one more -- Funny Video).


What do you meant by "a new seperator"?

What do you meant by " (minus the blue outline), "?

Are you using 800*600 screen?

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work on the whole design, background need to be changed as does the logo, and maybe a new colour theme
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I gona have to agree with GJ Online there.
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Old 08-29-2005, 08:47 PM   #16 (permalink)
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You can have this logo, just replace/overwrite the other one. I can easily change the logo bg color to match what you decide in the end.

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thank you very very very much.

I have uploaded it to the site.......... Everybody have a look pls,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, it that fun!!!

And this week, I have done many change to the site and welcome anymore comment

Thanks.

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Content are great. I must agree that you need to work on the logo.

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Page loads to slow.
Yes, it loads too slow.
But I do not know where is the bottleneck?

Do you have any suggestion?
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