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Old 08-13-2005, 12:52 AM THREAD STARTER               #1 (permalink)
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I've recently made this website for a client, www.defense-line.com, it’s a company located in US and working in the security fields as their main target is Iraq.

I want your feedback, plus a rank out of 10 if you wish, I'd be happy to have an average from many people as we don’t think similar.

Note: I had nothing to do with the content, the client asked me to make the website in this structure form.


Thanks people.
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Old 08-13-2005, 08:10 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I like it mucho. Nice choice of colors. I don't see a lot of room for improvement. Good job.
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Old 08-13-2005, 12:21 PM   #3 (permalink)
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This could be better written.
Ay least fix the following:
Replace "is very keen on treating" with "treats."
Replace "check" with "checks" or better yet "All of our
employees are subjected to screening and background
checks."
"Expats"?, Dont' use slang.
They sound like a bunch of kids.
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Old 08-13-2005, 12:45 PM   #4 (permalink)
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If its for secuirty kinda thing and in usa than u gotta get rid of that arabic link at the very right top, plus if for secuirty thing u need to choose colors according to military style dark green and gray not blue , they look very kiddie colors and have more of a feminin look , secuirty is supposed to represent strength.
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Old 08-13-2005, 01:21 PM THREAD STARTER               #5 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by GeneCosta
I like it mucho. Nice choice of colors. I don't see a lot of room for improvement. Good job.
Thanks GeneCosta

Originally Posted by dna
This could be better written.
Ay least fix the following:
Replace "is very keen on treating" with "treats."
Replace "check" with "checks" or better yet "All of our
employees are subjected to screening and background
checks."
"Expats"?, Dont' use slang.
They sound like a bunch of kids.

Thanks dna for your comments, but I have nothing to do with the text shown in the website, the client have the rights to change the website content not the web designer, this is the policy of our company, but I will suggest that to him.
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Thanks again.

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If its for secuirty kinda thing and in usa than u gotta get rid of that arabic link at the very right top, plus if for secuirty thing u need to choose colors according to military style dark green and gray not blue , they look very kiddie colors and have more of a feminin look , secuirty is supposed to represent strength.
Killerid, thanks for your comments … The company main offices located in US but they aiming Iraq as its current status … you know, well its not military 100%, it’s a security more related! I thought I should be constraint to logo color theme as the blue is part from, this what I think, not sure.

Anyway, thanks for your comments again Killerid.
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Old 08-14-2005, 10:40 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Hmm i like it good use of colours.
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Originally Posted by Damo-Online
Hmm i like it good use of colours.
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Hey,

Looks nice, i like the feel of it. I would change the font in the menu - needs a little tweaking.

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Originally Posted by StudioWorks
Hey,

Looks nice, i like the feel of it. I would change the font in the menu - needs a little tweaking.

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Thank you for your suggestion, but what is the font you suggest?
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its pretty nice use some flash amination it would be cool and probably get you more hits...
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I like the layout not sure about all the brown though but its nice and simple good work
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Old 08-15-2005, 11:18 PM THREAD STARTER               #12 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by brandonlanglois
its pretty nice use some flash amination it would be cool and probably get you more hits...
Yeah I agree with you, if I used the flash for the buttons, it would be nicer.

I will see what I can do for it.

Thanks for your suggestion.

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I like the layout not sure about all the brown though but its nice and simple good work
I know, the color theme is not perfect, I found that if I kept the website color within the logo colors palette would be better than bring any other colors I guess.
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Do you have any other suggestion for the color theme?

thanks for your comment.
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Old 08-16-2005, 01:00 AM   #13 (permalink)
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Nice use of colours, I wouldn't change alot, I like it alot. 9/10 (based purely on layout and graphics).
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Originally Posted by ComDriver
Nice use of colours, I wouldn't change alot, I like it alot. 9/10 (based purely on layout and graphics).

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I've waited someone to rank the website, and you are the first one who suggests a rank for the website, I appreciate it. Hope others do as well!

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Its nice id give it a good 7/10 im very hard to please so thats a good mark!
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Originally Posted by ammo
Its nice id give it a good 7/10 im very hard to please so thats a good mark!
I'm understandable person, thanks for your ranking, hope others do as well!
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