Layout Review

webcoffee · 07-25-2005, 05:14 PM

Please take a look at this project
http://free.of.pl/w/webcoffee/FS/

I would appreciate every opinion or suggestion

thanks

Sparky · 07-25-2005, 05:29 PM

None of the links or scrollbar work. Is it supposed to be like that for now?

But I like the layout. Maybe the logo could be better and the content area be a bit bigger.

Cooper · 07-25-2005, 06:27 PM

Looks nice, The "O Firmie" lettering at the top shouldn't be half hidden, i'd move that

Good work

worldstar · 07-25-2005, 09:14 PM

Not bad! Seems a little plain!

bhyraj · 07-25-2005, 11:13 PM

simply the best. nice work.

webcoffee · 07-26-2005, 12:59 AM

Originally Posted by Sparky

None of the links or scrollbar work. Is it supposed to be like that for now?

it's just a jpg image

i'll make it work if the client likes it

????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/109803-layout-review.html

thanx for the comments - every one is useful

please write more reviews

music_man · 07-26-2005, 02:26 AM

Hi

Your site is not valid XHTML as stated in your doctype: http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=ht...coffee%2FFS%2F

For your flash animation you need to have a preloader or it seems that the site is not running.
????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/showthread.php?t=109803

Do you need the scrollbars? They make the site seem more cluttered than it should be. It also makes the user do more than just read - that they have to scroll to find out more and thus losing the ability to quickly scan the content. It is best to have information easily accessible.

Well the English translation link on the top right didn't work so I can't really comment on the content - I must say that having translation for this type of site is sort of necessary.

The link on the bottom right should have the pretext "design by" or something before your email address. Which incidentally is not very spam protected because email harvesters look in the source code where you have your email address in the mailto field unencrypted. Try an ascii or javascript encryption - you can find a generator online.

Why is the heading obscured by the navigation? It makes it hard to read. I would suggest not having the title merged with the navigation. It is unncessesary and does not have much effect.

Be careful how many colours you use - that is try not to use too many for the colour scheme. The grey line going down beside the image on the left makes the site look constricted. Perhaps you could merge the logo on the top right with the border to get rid of the boxy effects.

ammo · 07-26-2005, 02:56 AM

Looks quite nice i like it!

StudioWorks · 07-26-2005, 12:18 PM

Hey,

Seams like it's not finished yet. I would add a preloader to the flash movie. Borders on the images are too big IMHO i would improve this aspect ( use smaller borders, looks better

)

All the best,

SW

andyy15 · 07-26-2005, 12:27 PM

nothing works, I don't like the title over the metal like background. Make a logo and the site will look much better.

phpwiz · 07-26-2005, 12:30 PM

Its pretty nice dude

good luck with it

07-25-2005, 05:14 PM	THREAD STARTER #1 (permalink)
webcoffee New Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 9	Layout Review Please take a look at this project http://free.of.pl/w/webcoffee/FS/ I would appreciate every opinion or suggestion thanks

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07-26-2005, 02:26 AM	#7 (permalink)
music_man NamePros Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: New Zealand Posts: 95	Hi Your site is not valid XHTML as stated in your doctype: http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=ht...coffee%2FFS%2F For your flash animation you need to have a preloader or it seems that the site is not running. ????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/showthread.php?t=109803 Do you need the scrollbars? They make the site seem more cluttered than it should be. It also makes the user do more than just read - that they have to scroll to find out more and thus losing the ability to quickly scan the content. It is best to have information easily accessible. Well the English translation link on the top right didn't work so I can't really comment on the content - I must say that having translation for this type of site is sort of necessary. The link on the bottom right should have the pretext "design by" or something before your email address. Which incidentally is not very spam protected because email harvesters look in the source code where you have your email address in the mailto field unencrypted. Try an ascii or javascript encryption - you can find a generator online. Why is the heading obscured by the navigation? It makes it hard to read. I would suggest not having the title merged with the navigation. It is unncessesary and does not have much effect. Be careful how many colours you use - that is try not to use too many for the colour scheme. The grey line going down beside the image on the left makes the site look constricted. Perhaps you could merge the logo on the top right with the border to get rid of the boxy effects. __________________ Self-service My homepage

07-25-2005, 05:29 PM	#2 (permalink)
Sparky NamePros Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Birmingham, UK Posts: 50	None of the links or scrollbar work. Is it supposed to be like that for now? But I like the layout. Maybe the logo could be better and the content area be a bit bigger.

07-26-2005, 02:56 AM	#8 (permalink)
ammo Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Cornwall! Posts: 2,251	Looks quite nice i like it!

07-26-2005, 12:18 PM	#9 (permalink)
StudioWorks no one lives forever Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: NamePros Posts: 8,092	Hey, Seams like it's not finished yet. I would add a preloader to the flash movie. Borders on the images are too big IMHO i would improve this aspect ( use smaller borders, looks better ) All the best, SW __________________ epagini.com mexicorealty.net softwarepit.com yadasoftware.com

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andyy15 NamePros Regular Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 877	nothing works, I don't like the title over the metal like background. Make a logo and the site will look much better. __________________ Quality Link Exchange Websites- Register your link directory for free today! Affordable Web Design & Hosting>> Avid Website Design Great Jewelry at LOW prices: NCJ.US Nita Creations Jewelry

07-26-2005, 12:30 PM	#11 (permalink)
phpwiz NamePros Regular Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: B.C, Canada Posts: 377	Its pretty nice dude good luck with it __________________ :cool: Cheap Turnkey Scripts: Turnkey4Less.com OnlineGames.net

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