HTMLIntro.com

snareklutz · 07-20-2005, 07:00 PM

Please check out my site, www.HTMLIntro.com.

I've just added one of the lil' under the logo, but now it looks kinda "spammy". Tell me what you think!

Bill · 07-20-2005, 10:20 PM

Its a little empty, maybe you could add some more graphics.

crazyluv · 07-20-2005, 10:28 PM

Nice simple and clean design. But the colors you’re using for the Google ad (the green in particular) don’t match the page at all.
Also when I first entered your site the title of your page (you know the <title>PageName</title>) was showing the php code. Now it seems to be working fine, maybe it was just a fluke?

The design is nice but the important part of a webpage is the content and normally I don't comment on this part but I like to scour the internet reading tutorials and such (being a self-taught amateur designer).

There are a lot of tutorial sites out there so I imagine it is tough to get this type of site going. So you'll need all the edge you can get.

So now to the point I started to read your tutorial and as soon as I read the page titled "Writing HTML" I thought isn't this suppose to be a tutorial for absolute beginners? You just mention the basic structure of an html page. Didn't see an "all pages should have a <title></title> tag" or "be sure to close tags if you don't what unexpected errors"...

When I see the term "absolute beginners" I think about people who know nothing about a subject and need to be spoon feed stuff slowly. You probably want to keep things short and simple but I can imagine all, the question your readers are going to have after reading this.

Hope this helps and good luck.

LeetPCUser · 07-21-2005, 04:42 AM

Maybe put a border around it or spice it up with graphics/logos. The site just seems kind of boring. If I was to visit it once I don't think I would return because there is nothing eye appealing that will make me come back.

DanT07 · 07-21-2005, 06:19 AM

I still think google ads ruin any site they are on

bhyraj · 07-21-2005, 06:44 AM

simple and clean site. looking good.

StudioWorks · 07-21-2005, 01:11 PM

Hello,

I think i've reviewed this site before as I remember the easy on the eyes look. Well done.

- SW

ammo · 07-22-2005, 06:26 AM

It looks better then i saw the site last time, its very easy on the eyes, its got just enough its not to cramped but it gets the point across well done!

Ben Woodhouse · 07-25-2005, 02:20 AM

Its good but its a little plain try having a backround colour and more graphics etc.

RegFee · 07-25-2005, 02:23 AM

Code:


I would probably put the code inside of a code box
to make it stick out better.  
Also, maybe get a script that converts the code to 
color coded, um, code, just to make it pop.

Other than that, nice clean site.

LeetPCUser · 07-25-2005, 05:43 AM

I like the site except it is a little to white and boring. There is a lot of text and not much eye grabbing items. I go to the site and I think, "nice logo and great potential...but my eyes are going crazy at all this text". If you add some other colors and some catchy photos, then I think it will be money. Keep up the good work.

07-20-2005, 07:00 PM	#1 (permalink)
snareklutz Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,055 142.50 NP$ (Donate)	HTMLIntro.com Please check out my site, www.HTMLIntro.com. I've just added one of the lil' under the logo, but now it looks kinda "spammy". Tell me what you think! __________________ My Afternic Names - no more sedo for me!!!

07-20-2005, 10:20 PM	#2 (permalink)
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07-20-2005, 10:28 PM	#3 (permalink)
crazyluv NamePros Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 98 213.00 NP$ (Donate)	Nice simple and clean design. But the colors you’re using for the Google ad (the green in particular) don’t match the page at all. Also when I first entered your site the title of your page (you know the <title>PageName</title>) was showing the php code. Now it seems to be working fine, maybe it was just a fluke? The design is nice but the important part of a webpage is the content and normally I don't comment on this part but I like to scour the internet reading tutorials and such (being a self-taught amateur designer). There are a lot of tutorial sites out there so I imagine it is tough to get this type of site going. So you'll need all the edge you can get. So now to the point I started to read your tutorial and as soon as I read the page titled "Writing HTML" I thought isn't this suppose to be a tutorial for absolute beginners? You just mention the basic structure of an html page. Didn't see an "all pages should have a <title></title> tag" or "be sure to close tags if you don't what unexpected errors"... When I see the term "absolute beginners" I think about people who know nothing about a subject and need to be spoon feed stuff slowly. You probably want to keep things short and simple but I can imagine all, the question your readers are going to have after reading this. Hope this helps and good luck. __________________ AEInbetween

07-21-2005, 06:19 AM	#5 (permalink)
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07-21-2005, 06:44 AM	#6 (permalink)
bhyraj Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 1,023 32.00 NP$ (Donate)	simple and clean site. looking good. __________________ Earn $ on web more income on web Free :........50MB WEBSPACE & 1000MB BANDWIDTH! JUST POST 50 TOPICS!

07-21-2005, 04:42 AM	#4 (permalink)
LeetPCUser Account Suspended Join Date: May 2005 Location: Whitewater, WI Posts: 3,714 17.55 NP$ (Donate)	Maybe put a border around it or spice it up with graphics/logos. The site just seems kind of boring. If I was to visit it once I don't think I would return because there is nothing eye appealing that will make me come back.

07-21-2005, 01:11 PM	#7 (permalink)
StudioWorks no one lives forever Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: NamePros Posts: 8,097 110.31 NP$ (Donate)	Hello, I think i've reviewed this site before as I remember the easy on the eyes look. Well done. - SW

07-22-2005, 06:26 AM	#8 (permalink)
ammo Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Cornwall! Posts: 2,243 228.15 NP$ (Donate)	It looks better then i saw the site last time, its very easy on the eyes, its got just enough its not to cramped but it gets the point across well done!

07-25-2005, 02:20 AM	#9 (permalink)
Ben Woodhouse NamePros Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 82 0.00 NP$ (Donate)	Its good but its a little plain try having a backround colour and more graphics etc.

07-25-2005, 02:23 AM	#10 (permalink)
RegFee DNOA Certified Seller Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Arizona Posts: 3,644 285.00 NP$ (Donate)	Code: I would probably put the code inside of a code box to make it stick out better. Also, maybe get a script that converts the code to color coded, um, code, just to make it pop. Other than that, nice clean site. __________________ RegFee.info - Available Domain Names - NEW DESIGN! DNWholesaler.com - Domains for Sale <--- baby Rogan says: sorry for spelling/punctuation mistakes, daddy's feeding me

07-25-2005, 05:43 AM	#11 (permalink)
LeetPCUser Account Suspended Join Date: May 2005 Location: Whitewater, WI Posts: 3,714 17.55 NP$ (Donate)	I like the site except it is a little to white and boring. There is a lot of text and not much eye grabbing items. I go to the site and I think, "nice logo and great potential...but my eyes are going crazy at all this text". If you add some other colors and some catchy photos, then I think it will be money. Keep up the good work.

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