My first Site- Please Review

DomainSlayer · 06-27-2005, 09:17 PM

This is my first owned website-
Theres a couple things I need to improve please let me know what you think.
www.landbuyowners.com

ThreeD · 06-28-2005, 02:55 AM

you shouldn't use the huge background pictures and the huge fonts. The color combo is off, you should remove the music to reduce loading time - I'd also consider a different nav menu. The site is very basic but serves it's purpose I guess

Ever thought of giving some the advanced CSS features a try?

StudioWorks · 06-28-2005, 03:22 AM

Hello,

Of course there are a lot to be done but if thisis your first web site I think you did a preety good job.

All the best,

- SW

kpm547 · 06-28-2005, 08:33 AM

It's a good start for a first website, but I think it needs a lot of work. It does not look very professional. I wouldn't have confidence with your company.
????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/102354-my-first-site-please-review.html

First of all, the images are of low quality. You need to use higher quality images. Get rid of the music. I never like music on websites. The font is too large and the page is too white (I also don't like the background lines). And to finish off, the nave bar is is too basic.

Keep working on it! I agree, check out the benefits of cascading style sheets. It will do wonders for your site. Checkout this link at w3schools.comw3schools.com/css/

Good luck. Post back when you've made some changes.

bhyraj · 06-28-2005, 08:48 AM

Ok Great site. need some finishing in site. make some work in site.

hasif · 06-28-2005, 10:23 AM

You must export the title image in higher quality, because the image quality is not such good. And the layout is wonderful, nice job for your first website.

SimpleMan · 06-28-2005, 10:26 AM

For your first site it's not bad at all.

I'd work on the header image (try to make fonts more readable and such) as I think everything else isn't too bad. You could go a little smaller on the font if you want as well.

cablejobs · 06-28-2005, 01:39 PM

Originally Posted by hasif

You must export the title image in higher quality, because the image quality is not such good. And the layout is wonderful, nice job for your first website.

I agree Also the image is to wide it go's past the rest of the page I would reduce the size and set it to center.

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StudioWorks no one lives forever Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: NamePros Posts: 8,092	Hello, Of course there are a lot to be done but if thisis your first web site I think you did a preety good job. All the best, - SW __________________ epagini.com mexicorealty.net softwarepit.com yadasoftware.com

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kpm547 NamePros Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 171	It's a good start for a first website, but I think it needs a lot of work. It does not look very professional. I wouldn't have confidence with your company. ????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/web-design-reviews/102354-my-first-site-please-review.html First of all, the images are of low quality. You need to use higher quality images. Get rid of the music. I never like music on websites. The font is too large and the page is too white (I also don't like the background lines). And to finish off, the nave bar is is too basic. Keep working on it! I agree, check out the benefits of cascading style sheets. It will do wonders for your site. Checkout this link at w3schools.comw3schools.com/css/ Good luck. Post back when you've made some changes. __________________ www.twocrazyducks.com - Two Crazy Ducks Web Hosting - Lethbridge, Alberta www.lasara.org - Lethbridge Area Search and Rescue themuellers.ca - The Mueller Family Webpage jobsitestructures.com - Job Site Structures Ltd. - for all your site office and accomodation needs!

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SimpleMan NamePros Expert Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: South Carolina Posts: 5,050	For your first site it's not bad at all. I'd work on the header image (try to make fonts more readable and such) as I think everything else isn't too bad. You could go a little smaller on the font if you want as well.

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