08-22-2003, 08:15 AM
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Need Opinions!!!!
I need help--I'm trying to figure out which headline is the best. Please let me know which one captures your attention the most.
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08-22-2003, 08:21 AM
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my opinion
"Working Moms, Would You Like To Write Your Own Paychecks?"
This one seems a lot more better. the first slogan doesn't make any sense, morever it seems like trying to give moms a chance to have an affair with their bosses or blackmail or something like that.
08-22-2003, 08:58 AM
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"Have You Ever Cried At Work Because You Miss Your Kids?"
Definately better. I would have thrgouht from a female perspective, having to leave your kids with someone else is not nice and u must miss them whilst at work. To be honest, this sounds like a "scam" system to me...Mothers, make a million dollars. I mean, if it were that easy, which, it isnmt, then every mother would apply and have a million dollars.
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08-22-2003, 02:14 PM
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Quote: Originally posted by Webtwink "Working Moms, Would You Like To Write Your Own Paychecks?"
This one seems a lot more better. the first slogan doesn't make any sense, morever it seems like trying to give moms a chance to have an affair with their bosses or blackmail or something like that.
That's very funny--I never thought of it that way!!!
LOL Guess that is why it is good to get lots of different opinions! Thanks.
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I think this one Attention Moms, Learn Secrets Your Boss Doesn't Want You To Know!" good luck
08-22-2003, 02:14 PM
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Quote: Originally posted by SY4 "Have You Ever Cried At Work Because You Miss Your Kids?"
Definately better. I would have thrgouht from a female perspective, having to leave your kids with someone else is not nice and u must miss them whilst at work. To be honest, this sounds like a "scam" system to me...Mothers, make a million dollars. I mean, if it were that easy, which, it isnmt, then every mother would apply and have a million dollars.
Just my opinion.
Great opinion as well. Thanks!
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08-22-2003, 02:15 PM
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<Voted- "Attention Moms, Learn Secrets Your Boss Doesn't Want You To Know!"
08-22-2003, 02:21 PM
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contest
i think you should put a contest on that. Just have nps as prize money, i am sure you will get a lot of good slogans on whatever you are to do.
08-22-2003, 02:22 PM
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Quote: Originally posted by Webtwink i think you should put a contest on that. Just have nps as prize money, i am sure you will get a lot of good slogans on whatever you are to do.
You mean put on a contest for the best headline? If so what are NPS? Thanks.
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08-22-2003, 02:29 PM
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slogan
yea, put a contest on the best slogan on a subject you want. It would depend upon you. you can offer from $50Nps to whatever you want. i'm sure a lot of people wouldn't mind an extra $100 NPs.
08-22-2003, 02:45 PM
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Sorry, I'm not getting the NPs...I don't think I have any to offer...how do I offer them?
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08-22-2003, 03:43 PM
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well
well go to Name Pros sales and auctions, and announce a contest on the subject you want, and the winner of the slogan (that you pick) will get $100NPs.
I hope u understood now.
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Right now you have 159NP$.
I'd have to agree with SY4's comments.
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Yes same here. A user slogan would work great.
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voted wrong
i think :
"Attention Moms, Learn Secrets Your Boss Doesn't Want You To Know!" is the best
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HAHa this is starting to be funny.
08-25-2003, 05:34 PM
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I'm familiar with Jay Abraham marketing materials (he's a big marketing guru). One of his rules for headlines is to use the words "you", "free" or some other equally powerful word. "Attention" is also a good way of starting.
The first headline is solid, the second one is too ambiguous. It sounds too much like a pipe dream.
I say its a tie between the first one and the working moms one.
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08-25-2003, 06:13 PM
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i think
i think it could be better if it was like this:
"Attention Working Moms, Would You Like To Write Your Own Paychecks?"
Just an Opinion!
08-26-2003, 05:55 AM
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Quote: Originally posted by Webtwink i think it could be better if it was like this:
"Attention Working Moms, Would You Like To Write Your Own Paychecks?"
Just an Opinion!
I like that!
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08-26-2003, 01:04 PM
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"Working Moms, Would You Like To Write Your Own Paychecks?"
IMHO.
Best of Luck, Beth.
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08-26-2003, 08:12 PM
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08-26-2003, 08:14 PM
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Quote: Originally posted by bethytk Thanks!
You're welcome.
100 NP$'s en route.
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08-27-2003, 08:21 AM
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Where does it tell how many NPs I have and what do I use them for...I tried to find some info. about them but not sure where to look. Can you please fill me in!!!
Sorry if this is a stupid question.
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08-27-2003, 08:24 AM
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Is this for a mass mailing thing?
When I get emails with simular titles as these, they go straight to the trash.
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