Critique this Business Card Please

tanay46 · 07-29-2009, 08:38 AM

Hey everyone, please give me your opinions on this business card.

Thanks.

crumblepie · 07-29-2009, 11:59 AM

It looks good, the only thing I would change is the color of the grey text on the grey background.

tanay46 · 07-30-2009, 02:47 AM

You mean in the upper part of the card? The text that says we design bla bla?

mertaux5 · 08-05-2009, 02:26 AM

I would change the colors, to something more lively.

moby · 08-05-2009, 08:01 AM

Hi tanay

Looks good to me, I would only make slight changes at the top - maybe a lighter shade of grey on the header ( even a little white color header perhaps ) and the shades of Red/Green on TJD text maybe a little darker/richer color.

Good Luck!

KingQub3d · 08-09-2009, 05:20 AM

Looks very nice to me... I love the color flow... looks a bit dull tho. And the left side is way to empty... add something creative there maybe ?

orcharddirect · 08-10-2009, 01:14 PM

Possibly do something to differentiate the web address, if you are going to keep the two different grays top and bottom maybe think about a divider line maybe in black. Maybe in the spare space on the left you could put an angled water mark of your logo very faint but re inforces your brand. Only suggestions youd have to see what they look like. Good luck!

Larry Fling · 08-10-2009, 01:35 PM

Shorten your phrase, get rid of the BLOW YOU AWAY... REALLY.. Doesn't sound professional to me.
Try to put all the font on the top into CAPS, it way look better.. The colors are fine, looks slick...
Good Luck!

aaronw165 · 08-14-2009, 08:21 AM

well I think the logo and the other fonts are not clear,you can see some noise around their edges.so if you are going to print the card with this quality,that wont be a good idea.and I agree with KingQub3d,the left side looks empty,you should fill it up with something,but keep it simple and clean.

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KingQub3d Account Suspended Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 7	Looks very nice to me... I love the color flow... looks a bit dull tho. And the left side is way to empty... add something creative there maybe ?

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Larry Fling Senior Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: LarryFling.com Posts: 2,281	Shorten your phrase, get rid of the BLOW YOU AWAY... REALLY.. Doesn't sound professional to me. Try to put all the font on the top into CAPS, it way look better.. The colors are fine, looks slick... Good Luck! __________________ DNSearch.net - Search for Available Domain Names Instantly! LarryFling.com - Coming Soon!

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aaronw165 Account Suspended Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2	well I think the logo and the other fonts are not clear,you can see some noise around their edges.so if you are going to print the card with this quality,that wont be a good idea.and I agree with KingQub3d,the left side looks empty,you should fill it up with something,but keep it simple and clean.

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