Critique This Logo Please

tanay46 · 01-07-2009, 02:49 AM

Thank you all..

FrozenNova · 01-07-2009, 06:33 AM

I'd say V1 and lower one with text as it looks a little more crisp the bottom one would tie in with the company bramding as it uses the logo.

gaucho1976 · 01-07-2009, 11:19 AM

I like V1 better

It's clear that's a J, the second one is confusing, you don't know if that's an U, a J, a random curvy shape or what. ie, on the text logos the first thing it jumps to me is TUDzine, maybe TIDzine but never TJDzine. Get rid of the logo in the circle (or use a circle with a white or black bg and a thicker border).

The red fonts are very compressed in spacing, let them breathe a little more, otherwise it looks like you really wanted to add that line so you forced it. Make it smaller and a little more spaced

IN recap, I'd use the V1 logo only that using green and black as you have in the first text logo. I'd get rid of the circle to avoid redundancy and get rid of the slogan or at least make it smaller. And I'd change the slogan color to some gray, something between #333 and #999 for white BG

BookMarc · 01-07-2009, 11:43 AM

pixelhero · 01-08-2009, 07:47 AM

v1 by far

dotnom · 01-08-2009, 10:10 AM

v1 for me too

khuldun · 01-09-2009, 11:50 PM

Version 2 without the background and a bit flatter would look better than Version 1 in my opinion.

pixelhero · 01-11-2009, 09:49 AM

Originally Posted by NVD

v1 by far

????: NamePros.com http://www.namepros.com/graphic-design-flash/548641-critique-this-logo-please.html
I was using example in the bottom image to judge my number choice.. You seem to have v2 on top in that 3rd picture... I actually meant to pick v2 in this case.

(dont change order of things half way through!

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Jacklin · 01-11-2009, 02:43 PM

I like V1 too ...

Hive · 01-11-2009, 04:12 PM

gota agree with others..v1 looks better than other ones

dmi · 01-11-2009, 04:13 PM

Number one looks the best.

hivelocitydd · 01-11-2009, 11:11 PM

First One looks Nice

AndrCruz · 01-12-2009, 05:45 AM

Agreed, number 1 definitely looks more creative and attractive.

nodws · 01-12-2009, 12:02 PM

# 1 all the way

soccersam · 01-18-2009, 11:18 PM

V1The blue hmm doesn't fit in I guess...

andd I like the second text.... stands out more to me.

Dustie · 01-24-2009, 01:04 AM

I definitely saw TJD right away. The first one on the white...looks great! Very nice Logo!

dirky00018 · 02-06-2009, 08:07 PM

V2 looks better but letter J cant be easily recognized.. so i'll go for v1

skrilla · 03-28-2009, 05:30 PM

It looks allot like TD Bank's logo, both of tehm kinda do, look http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_R8siXj5I9i...zc/s200/TD.jpg

I like the first one too tho

exponent · 03-30-2009, 09:48 PM

v1 by a mile

topunlimited · 03-31-2009, 12:33 PM

the first one looks great

atomicca · 04-01-2009, 01:47 AM

yea V1 looks more professional..
but d background not look so good

husanet · 04-01-2009, 06:03 AM

V1 is the best..........

regan · 04-01-2009, 07:29 AM

I like V1 .

gazzip · 04-04-2009, 01:44 PM

I like v 1 but I would squash it down a bit, looks a bit too tall in relation to its width IMO

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Warrichpk · 04-09-2009, 05:05 AM

v1 is much better

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01-07-2009, 06:33 AM	#2 (permalink)
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01-07-2009, 11:19 AM	#3 (permalink)
gaucho1976 NamePros Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 118	I like V1 better It's clear that's a J, the second one is confusing, you don't know if that's an U, a J, a random curvy shape or what. ie, on the text logos the first thing it jumps to me is TUDzine, maybe TIDzine but never TJDzine. Get rid of the logo in the circle (or use a circle with a white or black bg and a thicker border). The red fonts are very compressed in spacing, let them breathe a little more, otherwise it looks like you really wanted to add that line so you forced it. Make it smaller and a little more spaced IN recap, I'd use the V1 logo only that using green and black as you have in the first text logo. I'd get rid of the circle to avoid redundancy and get rid of the slogan or at least make it smaller. And I'd change the slogan color to some gray, something between #333 and #999 for white BG __________________ Mozlo - Keyword Research for Pros at newbie price

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01-09-2009, 11:50 PM	#7 (permalink)
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01-11-2009, 11:11 PM	#12 (permalink)
hivelocitydd Account Closed Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 35	First One looks Nice

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01-18-2009, 11:18 PM	#15 (permalink)
soccersam Account Closed Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 17	V1The blue hmm doesn't fit in I guess... andd I like the second text.... stands out more to me.

01-24-2009, 01:04 AM	#16 (permalink)
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02-06-2009, 08:07 PM	#17 (permalink)
dirky00018 New Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 23	V2 looks better but letter J cant be easily recognized.. so i'll go for v1 __________________ iWebNeeD $25 Contest iWebNeeD.com ad revenue sharing forum Tambayan Central - Earn Money Online\| Making Money Online \| Blogging

03-28-2009, 05:30 PM	#18 (permalink)
skrilla Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: canada Posts: 1,045	It looks allot like TD Bank's logo, both of tehm kinda do, look http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_R8siXj5I9i...zc/s200/TD.jpg I like the first one too tho __________________ Add Me to G+

03-31-2009, 12:33 PM	#20 (permalink)
topunlimited New Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 4	the first one looks great

04-01-2009, 01:47 AM	#21 (permalink)
atomicca New Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: root/sysadmin Posts: 22	yea V1 looks more professional.. but d background not look so good

04-01-2009, 06:03 AM	#22 (permalink)
husanet NamePros Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 157	V1 is the best.......... __________________ www.mobile-addict.com and www.hindiflim.net

04-01-2009, 07:29 AM	#23 (permalink)
regan NamePros Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 42	I like V1 .

04-04-2009, 01:44 PM	#24 (permalink)
gazzip First Time Poster ! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: GB Posts: 6,881	I like v 1 but I would squash it down a bit, looks a bit too tall in relation to its width IMO .