Well I didn't like having to scroll horizontally to see the entire page.
The graphics are kind of cool, kind of gui like, but the colors weren't so inviting to me.
There's a broken image on this page where you would click on the order button:
http://www.doyoursite.com/modules.p...showpage&pid=11
It was fairly easy to find the services and prices you're offering, so that's good.
IMO if you want to offer professional services like the ones that are listed on your page, then it needs a make over.
No offense meant by that, and I'm not saying I could do better, that's just from me looking at your site as potential customer. Maybe it's just the white text on black background or something.
